u pronounce the name Sacrifice get it right dog
i pull it and dump off i never would fight ya'll
but still, i wouldn't even roll that way
unless u push me an i didn't wanna go that way
i know my Sacrifice but i don't take no chancees
unless ya baby mom dancing an i don't see no panties
but anyway, lets get back to the topic
i don't stand on the corner i be in the back of the block
wit the crack in the rcoks
never crack in the socks
wit a target...ya know, practicing shots
wit ya face where the bulls-eye was
taking shots wit at lease four or five guns
and when i see u i automatically send shots
said u would never get cought sleeping
should have told ya feiend stop.........SACRIFICE!!

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Sacrifice

YOU ARE WACK DAWG.... PLEASE IMPROVE FASt.... YOUR A HURB

not bad dawg ... like some of the multi's in there ... nice flo and rhythm Id say you got some potential tho fo real ... keep em postin the hot shitz holla

ALL I CAN SAY IS,DIS MAKES ME FEEL BETTA BOUT MY RAPS,HA,IM JUS PLAYIN,PUT MO EFFORT IN2 IT THO I'D SAY,DIG DEEPER,N TAKE MO TIME 2 DEVELOPE YO RYMES,IT AINT AS BAD AS RICH SAYIN,BUT U DO NEED MO PRACTICE HOMIE,STAY UP,1

it was straight mane

i look at all the herbs and i wonder were the future of rb is goin. all i have to say is...damn i hope it improves drastically!! like molotv said you need to dig deeper and put some true effort from your soul into your raps yo. keep writtin and develope ya skills spend some time on one verse and see what happens!

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thanks my niggas 4 givein me a little respect but I didn't have enough time to finish this hit becuse this was a last minute thing, but thts o.k. I get back at ya'll wit some more HITS FORM THE STREETS and keep ya head up and keep that shit coming but ya'll haters............PLEASE JUMP OFF.

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Sacrifice

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Fuck is you thinkin' nigga??

Nah, it's wack but your not as wack as alot of other wack niggas'.

Just try to improve on alot of levels, and keep spittin and heads will give you advice as to wether or not ya elevatin.

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aiyyo i wsn't feelin this rhyme at all dunny...the rhymes were weak..no complexity...nada homes...you really need to work on your lines...that shit was wack like puff daddy dancers...put more hert into your shit...one