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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31338

So high, red eyes, call me Undertaker/ ...
schooling downcourt scoring like an L.A. Laker/ ...
the games hard but Im learning fast/,
hear my shit on the radio or your local telecast/ ...
A blast from the past its Assass/,
steady lookin to make the cash/,
when it comes to gangstas yea betta listen rookie/, its not my fault you converted to dick from nookie/, heres a cookie, so a flip flip flop fuck it/, disembowel you then put your organs ina bucket/, thats how I love it/, to be star is all wanted/, eastside rep'n thats how its flaunted/, I came back now you haunted/, ooo like a scary story I tell a tale, hit the head on the nail/ makin sure none of your peeps prevail/ but steady fail/ on the streets where people act so stale/, thats how I put it down on keystyle/, holla at me I got my shitz on profile/

Any good?

yo you got potential dawg! but try pickin one topic and stickin to it, you kinda did hear but it jumped around a lot. keep workin though and ill be sure to peep ya new posts.

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YO DIS SHIT WAZ NICE,I WAZ FEELIN WHERE IT WAZ GOIN,BUT LIKE ENDOVIDUAL SAID IT JUMPED ROUND,BUT IT HAD A GOOD FLOW 2 IT,KEEP POSTIN,1