~*Fear*~

The signs of fear are more commonly noted then not// The taste of fear can come from a single tear drop// the fastest hault in motion to a constant stare// the motionlessness is now the motion of fear//but the most camouflaged and concealed signs//come from the most horrid and hard to find//from the most flawless leader to the lazy slackers who get left behind// for their fears are quiet fear of self//The leaders afraid of being put back on the shelf//the slackers of not being able to get pitty or help//its sad we look in the mirrors to point out tragedy//when the war on terrorism moves beyond Afghanistan and could end in catastrophy//so as cat chases mouse, dog chases cat// terriosts fight you,and you chase a reflaction combat//so if there is nothing to fear but fear itself// the hidden fear is you with out a sign or cry for help//stuck inside your head intraped like a spirit// your a fear and yet the only one to fear it//

This was str8 i was
feeling it .It seemed more
like a poem than a rap but
you stayed on point.
So keep doing ya thang girl!!
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Good piece here.
Powerful message, contemplative lines, all around good concept.
I found the rhymes to be a little predictable but I was more focused on the content anyway.
Nice writes, gyrl.
Stay up.
Peace.

it's good to see sum femcees comin out ya'll need to start a femcee crew and mzillicit dis shit was good i just thought u was on da emotional tip which is cool all of ya'll should come holla at me and my dawgs at U.N.O. in crews cuz we need sum females if ya'll got skillz i'll help ya'll get in aight ~1~

yea wassup boo i kno u probaly tight and shit boo so u tryna collab with me and shit hit me up on aim at OutlawDash

yea wassup boo i kno u probaly tight and shit boo so u tryna collab with me and shit hit me up on aim at OutlawDash

u had sum good points in hea w/war n evrythang.I liked dis piece alot cuz it wuz short but said alot,rather songs wit full 3 verses that dont mean sh!t.Stay ^
-Avi

Stick a dick in ya mouth then try to rap....you'll probably cum with some better shit then this
work on it ALOT




peace.......
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hmmmmm it was str8 but eh i dont know it did seem more like a poem 1n3