heres the rules
first to five votes wins
3 hit k.o
no crying if you lose
25 bar max
verse due tommrow

who spit first?

after i post my verse i'm goin edit and post the links i swear:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0707#post300707

EMPLOYMENT???? If he calls 'Stayin On Knees' ways to give BLOWS "BELOW THE BELT",//1
HE KNOWS THE WEALTH..... you couldn't STEP 2 THIS if you CLONED YOURSELF!!,//2
STONED HIS HEALTH, I SEND SCRIPTS that BEND TRICKS he's in a room with TEN DICKS?,//3
Claims its a "CONSTITUTIONAL COINCIDENCE" BUT see we all know what "DOC-MEANT"(amendment),//4
DEFEND AGAINST?? I DEFEAT SCORES, CHEAT MORE, Still hold no weight on WEAK FLOORS,//5
Undefeated?? The way I got 'Brain' "FUCKIN LOSIN" he feels like a CHEAP WHORE,//6
vocab shit:
Drastically madly murdering decisions,//7
Needin no medal to settle my visions//8
//Winning is first, humiliation secondary,,//9
Beginning to disperse, navigation's necessary//10
//I'm sayin you on yo way wit no direction,//11
Comin harder than a 20 inch erection//12
//Yo I'm demented like demons usin mentation,//13
Destroyin all wit cerebral constant concentration//14

my real style:
a canadien rapper damn i'm scaring your protection,//15
i'm the hardest canadien nigger while you just daring for elections,//16
it's true cause when your mom bends down you stare in the directions,//17
i'm hot trained, not insane,//18
to make this doctor open minded, i'll take out the docs brain,//19
this canadien shit, and no your not a meneber,//20
cause i'll fuel inject your brain like i'm sowllen members,//21( a canadien rap group}

ending shit:
kid, I'm attachin-the-pen with rapping-acidic "CAPPING-the-tip//22
jus to laugh-at-yah-shit adapting-your-rhymes and turning-it-,//23
back to murder you with only HALF-OF-THE-SCRIPT!!//(DAMN!)
then after I win the battle post the onther half of the shit,//25




i had to rush this no time for written a real verse

nice verse
heres mine:

your skills are basic, you aint ready for dis battle//1
i got ill tactics standin on a higher level//2

my lyrics are lethal, i spit em like an automatic rifle//3
im cuzin hole in your skull with the bullets of my mental//4

Im in the streets ridin deeper then ink in a tattoo//5
i cant wait till i get another hit at you//6

let me tell you its not a battle for gayness//7
if it was you would have knocked me out with sucess//9

this whack nigga trying to run out with my thread//9
ill cut his tongue and make him swallow back every words that he said//10

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my verses get into your face instantly//11
faster then speedy gonzalez on extasy//12

if your in a proper state of mind you should be fearin me//13
im not a chinese rapper but i will beat u lyric-lee//14

your weak rhymes cannot impress me
cuz im the freshest emcee youll ever see in this whole galaxy//15

you bittin' my skills but say you bought it for free//16
ill add you to my kills men you dont deserve that trophy//17

make you suck ma dick like monica lewinsky//18
you verse are gettin me sick like 3 bottles of whisky//19

if u think youre the hardest canadien, you must be flyin real high//20
this is a deathmatch and you are about to die//21

I ca' feel the jealousy I dont need to speak to haters//22
they know I spit heat yall woulda thought I been lived at the equator//23

homie, take this advice you better....//24
bring some tightest shit or run like a nose in the cold weather//25

Black Shadows vurse was ill, but the vocab shit is realy similar to shit I have used befor...
Drastically madly murdering decisions,//7
Needin no medal to settle my visions//8
//Winning is first, humiliation secondary,,//9
Beginning to disperse, navigation's necessary//10
//I'm sayin you on yo way wit no direction,//11
Comin harder than a 20 inch erection//12
//Yo I'm demented like demons usin mentation,//13
Destroyin all wit cerebral constant concentration//14

But punches were tight..,
to make this doctor open minded, i'll take out the docs brain,//19
this canadien shit, and no your not a meneber,//20
cause i'll fuel inject your brain like i'm sowllen members,//
DEFEND AGAINST?? I DEFEAT SCORES, CHEAT MORE, Still hold no weight on WEAK FLOORS,//5
Undefeated?? The way I got 'Brain' "FUCKIN LOSIN" he feels like a CHEAP WHORE,//6

Docs vurse was ill too..
my verses get into your face instantly//11
faster then speedy gonzalez on extasy//12

if your in a proper state of mind you should be fearin me//13
im not a chinese rapper but i will beat u lyric-lee//14

your weak rhymes cannot impress me
cuz im the freshest emcee youll ever see in this whole galaxy//15

make you suck ma dick like monica lewinsky//18
you verse are gettin me sick like 3 bottles of whisky//19

if u think youre the hardest canadien, you must be flyin real high//20
this is a deathmatch and you are about to die//21

I ca' feel the jealousy I dont need to speak to haters//22
they know I spit heat yall woulda thought I been lived at the equator//23

homie, take this advice you better....//24
bring some tightest shit or run like a nose in the cold weather//25

Vocab- Doc
Punches- Shadow
Metaz-Shadow
Vurse-Shadow
Flow-Doc

Good battle

uppin fo' votes

my vote is for shadow...the "vocab" part was ill..and so was your "real style"....anyways both were good but shadow gets my vote

i give props 2 both of ya. i was feelin both flows. but 2 me i think shadow took it wit his mad use of vocab and he came harder ya know. much respect 2 both of ya

vote:shadow

im out