http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0879#post300879

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0880#post300880

lets get down to buisness....

i see you, my eyes turn green, lifes not-fair/
lady magnet, even gay-guys, i wanna block-their/
advances, what are the chances, i barely know what romance-is/
i got a crush on a girl who wants you, dont know the answers/
why? it seems females got a crush for the pretty boys/
and tell those to fuck off who are rough and gritty boys/
all this shitty-noise in my eardrums from critisism and ridicule/
my voice too deep, stubble too rough, game is pituful/
stuck in a fucking friend-zone, others run straight to the end-zone/
and then-bone the women who i'd love to take home/
i need to bring violence to these pricks that jump-queues/
step in front of me, turn them round and thump-fools/
so fuck you, this bullshit predjudice, just coz i'm tough/
see i'll never ahead-of-this, crazy thing called love/
it's like an invisible mark i cant get it washed-off/
i'm in limbo with a pair of nuts needing a toss-off/


keystyled in about 10 minutes, blah

stuck in a fucking friend-zone, others run straight to the end-zone/
and then-bone the women who i'd love to take home/

oh yeah

and this
see i'll never ahead-of-this, crazy thing called love/
it's like an invisible mark i cant get it washed-off/
i'm in limbo with a pair of nuts needing a toss-off/



this is cool man i'm goin to get more of this shit happenin cos it sounds good

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makes sense right?

This shit was wack....basic nothing stuck out...just another wack ass version of them niggas southstar & smilez love song....lol
work on something else.....

^^^^^^^ Agree

Is there anyone better?

ok......**clears his throat**

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRBBBBBBSSS S!!!!!!!!

this was:

a) a keystyle

and

b) better than anything either of you have done in your entire netcee lives

so fuck you both and eat a dick.

anyone who wants to post CONSTRUCTIVE feedback, feel free to post below.

1. keystyle or not u lame as hell
2. all them post u think you would have skills
3. thank god your a netc cause in the real world u would get crushed


4. never better than me dog kiss ya moms wit dat mouf

stop freeposting in my shit you little nut sucking bitch.

if you so damn good with your little newbie status, put your tiny nuts on the table and post something up in open mic.

I thought that was tight, it had a good flow and content to it. These fools above just don't understand anything about style. Style can be switched up. I can bet both of them morons listen to 2pac yet don't say he's wack b/c he can rap about killing then turn around the next song and rap about something like "baby don't cry". It's just ignorance that fuels them. I will leave those posts just to show it.

pz

yea the fuck right now i know how u rap get yo lame asses on shit make me sick u net'Cs u dont do it for the love anymore there is no work in the rhymes juss bullshit they could never say in a real battle thats why they put it on here asses

advances, what are the chances, i barely know what romance-is/
i got a crush on a girl who wants you, dont know the answers/

tight, just towards the end i think u kinda lost it a bit