embedding overhauls of verbal assaults
vowels spillin like bowels of internal asphalts
highway blood phaze from nucleis to cyberoptics
my psychotical plots in lock knots of opts to top the amplifiance
as death defiance for fine lines of rhymes of an alliance
tests intense descents for reliance through silence

severance leverage and conquering damage
crumbled by the habits of savage landed hits
expanded in bits and branded em by the pits

entombed zones of these catacombed domes
cyphered the spheres of drones with vipers of piercing tones

get connected and lethal injected
the unexpected amended the unaccepted

official prodigal prophecies of apostle monasteries
glaring reflections from the sun in trajections to the minds of one
as it's rotation anebriated hated deception
the interception to dislextion swept the spectrum in collection to the reception

trusted by the honors of enrolled soldiers and rows of doners
dawning the righteous fist with an ion of mighteous blyss
the eye of the lion sights on it's gift
as the hunters are becoming hunted of this

i like how you started off....pretty gud....nice verse....

rat'n....8/10

UPtZ

nice spit dawg, good logic and vocab. nice flow, and made much sense, and I like ya complex stayle. Shit was tight dawg keep spittin' nem shits for-real playah. you do battles or nah? hit up U.N.O. dawgie, if you do like ta battle and ya got some proof of battle skills.

peace

OuTtIe

I thought this made no sense whatsoever. Seems like you just used extensive vocabualry and have no idea what the words mean.


embedding overhauls of verbal assaults
vowels spillin like bowels of internal asphalts
highway blood phaze from nucleis to cyberoptics
my psychotical plots in lock knots of opts to top the amplifiance
as death defiance for fine lines of rhymes of an alliance
tests intense descents for reliance through silence



Spilling like internal asphalts? You got an explanantion for that?

Rest was the same. Just no point of focus, no topic, and no sense of logic in this. Sorry, I'm just not feeling it.

I'd tell you your concept was good if I could understand half the shit you said man!... lol... nah, I'm playing...

true some of it I didn't get... thas some complex ass style... it's like something I'd hear from the wu-tang forever cd or something... ya know...
Vocabulary was crazy, and the pace of the flow was pretty much on point...
I mean you hear it and the shit sounds hot... but if cats don't really get it... they ain't gon' feel it... like this cat above me, I really like your flow and vocab, should use that all the time, but chill with your concept and topic, do something that makes a bit more sence to the general public... nah what I mean...
Thas all, peace man, I' m out

yo thats some tight stuff keep thuggin playa

This was a hot piece...nice flow,nice wordplay,nice multi's...good shit....keep droppen....

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I dont think even YOU know what direction you were heading with this yo...honesly this is garbage, toss it out...just a bunch of words tangled together....wasnt worth reading at all..sorry