RULES:

First to 5, 3 votes = KO
No Crew, dick ryders, or hatin ass niggas votin
Explain ya votes, if not, it don't count
max 20 lines
NO FEEDING OFF VERSES please!

Thank you enjoy

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2724#post302724

Catastrophe, blasphemy happening all in one statement,
meticulous and ridiculous that you could be my replacement/
adjacent to the fact that your syntax is wack,
my words will eat you between meals, you jus a Lunchable Snack/
Felon~E's gettin smacked back down to crack town in the Red Light District,
Dyce will shake you like Yahtzee and become a self-proclaimed misfit/
"Shorty where yo head at?" is the phrase that you constantly asked,
niggas be 'scratchin' yo throat like it's some 'turn-table' wax/
get in your proper position cuz my vivid descriptions dominate,
even if yous was big, white, and hairy you couldn't abominate/*
you got bitches trickin yo dick as if they were valet parking,
but when you pick it back up, it's got 1000 miles and the oil's barfing/**
bombing you constantly like 'red dots' on Pearl Harbor,***
yo tape-up is so choppy that I'll assume M.J.s surgeon is your barber/
properly retarded, I jus be-smarted you in one verse,
I'm the Aftermath, so Addictive, bitch of course the Truth Hurts/

*Abominable Snowman
**leaky dick is a sign of disease;-)
***red dots on Japanese flags

The Great Child has spoken......

hooooooooooot verse, waitn 4 Felon~E 2 drop.........

yo, that was tight..... I want to see felon-E's verse... if he can beat it... yo he got skillz... but until then that was an ill drop..

Yo, tight start dude. Impressive.

Felon'll have to be sharp to to make the cut!!

thnx ya'll

waitin for kid to post.....

here's my other link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31904

Nigga I know you see this.........

don't duck cuz you got iced
24hrs till you're DQ'd