Ready when you are

Seeing as how you aint doing shit and your dissin my Movie Hackers im just ganna drop my lines

5-10 bars
5 votes win (must explain)


Fithycalibur ima jump on you like a fat kid on cake
and that fat kid was me so you just made a mistake//

The frosting are my lyrical rhymes, dusted in coke
so you keep on snortin it up screamin, "Hey Free dope"//

Till your ass got cought and sent up state
now your helping big black guys masterbate//

Dont worry about your moms ive got her on lock
the targets on her mouth, followed by my cock//

10 years have passed and your ass if finally out of jail
I decided to give in and pay your fucking bail//

You might have paid your debt to society but you havent paid mine
if you try to run away ill drop a couple 9's//

so get your ass in the car cause were goign for a ride
as we enter your old hood you duck down and hide.
Afraid of what your friends might say but they already left your ass behind//

Now get out my car bitch and check to see if yours is alive
I accidently left her in the house, chokin on my lines//

Ready when you are.

one

Any day punk

ya lil dick rida, u a camel ain't close ta kool/
and i'm da newoport floatin round at cha high school/

see when u spit, its worse than a minute fuck and goin ta sleep/
cut off da left part of ya shirt, and attch it ta ya right arm so u can have a long sleeve/

wanna talk bout moms,lets talk bout urs/
how her waist is da frame,and her legs always open like doors/

see u may need 5-10, while i only need a couple/
here some steriods fo da next time u wanna flex ya muscle/


talk bout emcee?u mean eminem/
cuz da structure of ya rhyme was bitten right off him/

lol cuz u's a dumbie/
hope u don't take this shit serious cuz u'd neva get money/

this is a waste of time, i already know whos da chapion/
it's me, join da clic sing da anthemwit cam'ron

bite fithycent shit, just changed some words/
only time u on da internet, is lookin for nerves/

d

Alright....Upin for some votes

P.S if Eminem rapped/freestyled like that he wouldnt have made it anywhere, so dont come off tellin me I ripped him

still uppin for votes

upin for votes

Upin for votez

NEED VOTES PLEASE

diz battle wz pretty whack bof eMCees' verse wa ass but.........

Fithycalibur ima jump on you like a fat kid on cake
and that fat kid was me so you just made a mistake//
^^whac

The frosting are my lyrical rhymes, dusted in coke
so you keep on snortin it up screamin, "Hey Free dope"//
^^whack

Till your ass got cought and sent up state
now your helping big black guys masterbate//
^^iight

Dont worry about your moms ive got her on lock
the targets on her mouth, followed by my cock//
^^um.....whack

10 years have passed and your ass if finally out of jail
I decided to give in and pay your fucking bail//
^c'mon, so far most of ur linez iz whack

You might have paid your debt to society but you havent paid mine
if you try to run away ill drop a couple 9's//
^^o ma goodness, whaaaaack

so get your ass in the car cause were goign for a ride

as we enter your old hood you duck down and hide.
Afraid of what your friends might say but they already left your ass behind//
^^whack
Now get out my car bitch and check to see if yours is alive
I accidently left her in the house, chokin on my lines//

((diz kid only had one iiight line))


ya lil dick rida, u a camel ain't close ta kool/
and i'm da newoport floatin round at cha high school/
^^nice flow

see when u spit, its worse than a minute fuck and goin ta sleep/
cut off da left part of ya shirt, and attch it ta ya right arm so u can have a long sleeve/
^^iight

wanna talk bout moms,lets talk bout urs/
how her waist is da frame,and her legs always open like doors/
^^dat line iz played

see u may need 5-10, while i only need a couple/
here some steriods fo da next time u wanna flex ya muscle/
^^haha, nice punch

talk bout emcee?u mean eminem/
cuz da structure of ya rhyme was bitten right off him/
^^um........ok [i guess]

lol cuz u's a dumbie/
hope u don't take this shit serious cuz u'd neva get money/
^^lolz nice flo

this is a waste of time, i already know whos da chapion/
it's me, join da clic sing da anthemwit cam'ron
^yo dat did not rhyme

bite fithycent shit, just changed some words/
only time u on da internet, is lookin for nerves/
^^iight punch.

((overall nice flow on diz rhyme))

punchez=calibur
flo=calibur
meta4'z=nun really
creativity=tie

vote=calibur

thanx fo da reply son,but i do get deep than that.
it was just a lil somethin ta shake dis cat!




50calibur

aight here we go

im not voting for largehuman because he's bout to be ko'ed with one more vote, itsa cause i liked his style better, i liked his lines even tho the rest of yall calling it whack, fuck that. i thought that was some tight shit he was pulling, i could just visualise all that shit like a little movie or something, kinda like in training day.

calibur i didnt like yours, it had some aight punches and somewhat good flow, but i just couldn't follow it, you were jumping in there and i couldnt see it. in a way i liked it, but ima say next time go deeper like you said you can, don't go light like you did, cuz if ida heard better from you, then you woulda closed this shiat, but you didn't.

vote= largehuman

uppin for votes 1-1 or 1-0 me if you dont count the flipping of the coin