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Old 02-25-03, 10:57 AM   #1
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Life Reflection

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These Mouthy Niggaz Be Testin Me,
Tryin To Call me Out Pop Shots
And Get Tha Best Of Me,
Like I Cant Hold My Own,
As If Theyll Get Me Well Exceptionally,
I Cant Let These Fuckas Talk
They Aint Worth Shit Till Tha Death Of Me,
They Worthless Not Deservin
Niggaz Is Fowl Im Flagrant,
Moved Around A Lot Didnt Have
Much Time To Make Friends, O Well
It Happened Anyway So Naturally
With Many Blazed Just Facts To Be
Moods Usually Calm That Actual Peace,
Forrealz, One Day Itll All Make Sense
I Used To Get Heavy Intoxed
And Wonder Where Tha Days Went,
Id Walk Down Tha Block And Let
A Hot Joint Hit Tha Pavement
Benn Pretty ill SInce Grade Ten
Started Towards Tha End Of Eigth
Said Muthafuck All Of These Fake Friends,
Racin Against Time Never Is Tha Time
Tha Race Ends Stuck In It Till Im Finished I Am

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Old 02-26-03, 02:04 AM   #2
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Ayo..All I Needs Is Like One Reply...Ive Been Home Since Saturday Afternoon...I Bused From South Carolina On Friday..
My Apologies DGR...Pm Me Or Reply To This Here..Peace

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Old 02-26-03, 12:38 PM   #3
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Erm...

...it seemed a bit shaky at times...like it's kind of unedgy or something....kind of lacking in something..

..but on the other hand, it seems quite raw, and has a 'personal' depth to it...

...can't quite put my finger on it, but there is something about this piece that sways me both ways...

...i think that's enough said...

....respect...
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Old 02-26-03, 01:24 PM   #4
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Youd Think Different Hearin It In Audio Cause I Kept
Tha Rhyme Scheme Throughout Tha Whole Verse...

Whan Have I Ever Put Commas In A Verse..Never ?!?!?

Jay Z - I Did It My Way Instrumental

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Old 02-27-03, 11:04 AM   #5
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Thanks 4 Everything..Peace
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Old 03-05-03, 08:20 PM   #6
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uppin 4 sleepers
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Old 03-05-03, 11:40 PM   #7
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with the pressures of everyday livin'//when you're innocent, yet still unforgiven//overwhelming adversity becomes ordinary//and yet death continues to spare me//the peace of tomorrow's dreams//and and rapture of those finer things//like halos and golden wings//and all that which eternity brings//sing of today and don't look to tomorrow//and although yesterday was filled with sorrow//borrowed time is what we are all using//and this life is of our choosing...
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Old 03-06-03, 02:43 PM   #8
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Collab? WTF Thanks For Replyin..Peace
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Old 03-06-03, 04:50 PM   #9
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i just thought i would give my thoughts on this subject....

sorry
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Old 03-07-03, 09:41 AM   #10
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I like it, deep stuff. When you write about reflections of things, sometimes you can put out an image people didn't see at first and help them see. Keep droppin'.


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Old 03-10-03, 01:47 PM   #11
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Thanks 4 Replin Ill..Do I Know Ya From Somewhere
Maybe We Should Collab Or Put A Sampler Cd Around
Tha Way While We're Still Breathin....Lol..Peace

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Old 03-10-03, 07:29 PM   #12
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wtf? who u talkin bout at the start of da peice?
second half was much more original and a big improvement.
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Old 03-11-03, 12:14 AM   #13
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deep piece i felt it a little rusty at some parts yet all in all it was a fine piece holla bak 1
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Old 03-11-03, 06:12 PM   #14
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pudsy.who are you..idont know ya...people that i was dalinwith..thats who im talklin about..it as original..

who tha fuck are you?

if u didnt like tha first hal y wuld you like tha second?
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