Poelitics

Suffocating words with a pre and a suffix ~
Suffering nothing, this bar rhymes with no assonance ~
I’m dropping a bunch of homophones ~
I’m punching fags for calling homo’s phones ~
Twenty-six letters in turn form millions of words ~
Constants and vowels make nouns and verbs ~
Sitting here writing this, I use up the pens ink, held in my fist ~
One pencil writes about fifty thousand words in English ~
Counting front and back, theirs sixty six lines on an average page ~
Twelve words a line, that’s seven hundred and ninety two words per page, not counting “A’s” ~
With one pencil, I rhyme and fill sixty three pieces of paper, with nine and a quarter lines crossed out ‘cause of sheer rage ~
I wonder is their another word for synonym ~
Apple cider, cinnamon sticks, good for flu symptoms ~
Writers block, like Shakespeare carved into Mt. Rushmore ~
Grab and mount the pen, impregnate paper, break blocks like Thor ~
Put a comma on my fist and give you some punctuation ~
Bill Clintons ahead of the rest, that’s a pun situation ~

Poetic Plus Politics Produces Poelitics
Poetic Plus Politics Produces Poelitics

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious ~
Sounds pour hourly, fragile linguistics explain dry oceans ~
Spit meta’s and imagery, I need water, consume calories of this world ~
I’m using so many similes, I’m like a valley girl ~
Not much difference between what’s the truth and what’s fictitious ~
When holding a pen, barriers are crossed everything’s realistic ~
Ten tedious attendants tend to the tender wounds of two tenors ~
Apprehended all alliteration, now to find the rhyming ender ~
Search relentless for that perfect sentence ~
Work senseless, mold a word contortionist ~
Sarcastic content, don’t hold back, Like Poe flow openly ~
Can you grasp it? Minus the beat, rap is basically poetry ~
I don’t just open creativities door, I make it unhinged ~
Immunity from rules, I thought nothing rhymed with orange ~
The pen, the mic, the mind, it’s the elements ~
This is the politics of poets, its Poelitics ~

Poetic Plus Politics Produces Poelitics
Poetic Plus Politics Produces Poelitics

This Wasn't All That Great, Good Vocab. And Flow, You Had Some Good Lines In There, It Was Jus Boring And Almost Had No Meaning To It At All

Idiot...

Yo self, u gotta take some criticism man, thats how u learn, sure it aint the hottest shit created but you got stuff to work on, we all do.

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yo, either you on a whole different level... or a few parts of this just didn't make sense... most of this has complexity... and I didn't get some of it... but like I said, I'm a simple mothafucker.... lol...
You did have a pretty good flow... hot vocab... college level shit... good rhymes... although I found that some parts didn't exactly rhyme... thas all

Peace

Thanks man, good looking.

It does have some complexity...Its mostly poetic devices, which some people don't all know. A lot of people didn't actually understand them, (friends and stuff, not this site).

and I know a lot of people don't understand half the lines because of that. Like the first bar. "Assonance", it means the rhyming of the consonants in two words. Assonance rhymes with Suffix, but not when you look at it.
Homophones are words that have the same pronounciation as another word, but not the same meaning.

Thanks again.


And Meadskillz shut up. Serious. I do take critism. But not from idiots. He said no constructive critism, so I don't listen. Out of all people you say that to me? You fucking idiot! Learn who the fuck I am before you talk...I am constantly taking advice from people.

like alias said, you were on a whole different level. and boring that was not, it kept my atention through the whole thing, and at the end left me want to read some more. and the vocab, rhymes, and flow was right on the whole way. very sick verse....i want to see more of that shit.

This piece was hot as shit.....Minus tha replies of tha simple minded who said it was wack......I read this shit thru twice.....There's mad creativity in it.....A lot of quotable lines and a lot of down to earth shit if U get it.....I liked this piece a lot man.....Tha only thing that need's to be upped is tha hook.....Peace

i think it was some of the hypest shit i've seen in awhile, comin from a nicca that just sits back and don't think like average people. i ain't dick riddin but thats what keeps niccas like me knowin da off da wall shit we say means somethin to otha people. to sum it up niccas that don't think like average humans r on some news shit! just don't hate on a battle i'm in by callinme a bitch.
keep writtin son
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50cal 2 desert eagles!

Much thanks to all those, Serious its appreciated! The replies saying good shit, makes me want to write more (not saying that the bad replies make me not want to write, but the good one's make me feel good, ya know.) So Thanks!




I quoted this, and then deleted your post.
1. I don't battle. Like I said, learn who I am before you speak.
2. You think I would waste my time on you? Not to mention waste lines?

Good piece.. I don't feel it needs much work, unless you want EVERYBODY to understand it.. When I first saw the title, I expected one of those "anti-United States, anti-war, what's wrong with America?" types of pieces, which are by far the most overused and annoying topics on the web..

On of those pieces I couldn't stop reading once I got into it .. Had an enjoyable and intelligent humor that was challenging to understandd, man.. Keep doing what you're doing, and let me know if every do anything w/ this!

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hey self, take this piece and shove it up your ass or take critisism like a real mc ..


This Wasn't All That Great, Good Vocab. And Flow, You Had Some Good Lines In There, It Was Jus Boring And Almost Had No Meaning To It At All


where in there is hate or unconstructive critisism .. seriously .. your not near being great, so work on your shit, and learn to take it like a man .. dont reply with some dumbass response dissing me either son .. its not nearly worth it ..


Pz

Thanks Ali,

To U.e. Look another idiot...See if I listen to actually what you said, it would do nothing for me. If you knew who I was, you wouldnt talk like that. I listen and help anyone that approche's me. But once you start talking like an idiot, I give you the broom...

I don't think I am a good rapper. God NO! If anything I am my own worst critique.