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Old 02-28-03, 05:40 PM   #1
wisdometernal
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Post Fire Under Water

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time away from my capacity of knowledge and wisdom
i speak humble and sincere so please listen
every one person thinks they can flow from straight off the mind
what poetry is, no its not as simple as write and ryhme
what you speak into the keys what you type onto the screen
the true inside your soul what no man knows, what is unseen

last times journey halted at the dry end of my 'dome'
of rap and hip hop, my words consist of the new slang that's been hanging around before my birth
to speak in your manner i will as i continue to roam
to spread the message beyond the horizon where you never find the sunset is what my poetry is really worth

forever
endless
precise
free
there is no reason why i will never stop being me. . .
the true poet that is *S.P.E*

My fire that warms the inner soul will burn out under the waters Flood
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Old 03-01-03, 07:31 AM   #2
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All i'll say is this....

..intriguing...a kind of brave and fresh approach...to a 'subject' that is hard to depict in a way...

..most definetly like this...

...respect...
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Old 03-05-03, 11:18 AM   #3
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I guess the rest of this forum is dead in silence and let me say that there is no reason to MOURN if thats the case. Bring yourselves up and let me know what you think. I peep the others and the HONEST truth is this. . . as much i like to ryhme i feel that thats just not as creative as before unless like in freestylin, there are metaphors. . . Unique is what sets you apart from the mirror you dig!?
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