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03-01-03, 01:18 AM | #1 | ||
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KnightShade & Rudeboy BLUE present: Apatheater
IP:
This is a Colab Writtin up just 4 hours ago, me and my boy Rudeboy BLUE were rippin it up to some instrumental, and this is what we got for this piece
KnightShade Productions Presents: Apatheater Verse 1 : Rudeboy BLUE I think I'm magna prone, melting away in the act of Rome look past the throne, dust is collecting in the catacombs preparing for the mass of bones my science long detaining decaying in a cover shell, a shadow still berating debating this derailing paradox, I wear the stocks with the most evil of holies, killing time until I'm spared this box and until the day I'm marked with blood I'll never share my crops for which I've suffered the many sins that made my parents drop and when day fades to ebony I sit remembering the long for passion... the axis that made us betrayed us when we were song and dancin the logs I've cabined, wedgin in the teeth of the smoke stacks with no tracks, they're smelling the elation, can we hold that? the new pollution, my windows breathe no absolution so cram confusion... bleed myself, another damn delusion I stand, defusin... sit and relieve the pain of legs my brain is eggs... let it pass, there are no famous dregs Verse 2: KnightShade Left my crayons to waste in a story-boarded abandoned fate God’s plan can wait,watch the vein bulge in his banished face Go ahead and damn this place,I never liked it anyway… It’s man-made & I’d fancy my ripped canvas landscape any day Pave that empty grave you can’t manipulate such an endless space.. So I’ll save it from this damaged state & splatter my cans of paint With Random aim over these tattered draped prison brick walls Now mimic how the drips crawl,& follow the leaders to the pitfalls Stop only to wish upon my stars..for your heavens to be this tall While my night breaks and dawns a day of flickering dim bulbs A sun just warm enough to touch..with a lingering slit pulse. Casting my life-lined kite into a pallete knifed wind brawl I’ll face whatever way.. the wind floats this paper thin soul Then brush stroke through the cascade of breaking windows To make my time a widow,finally this air’s running out of stock. I don’t want to quit though,I just can’t paint what God forgot.
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03-01-03, 02:44 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
nice dawg, tight read for-sure. Keep droppin' them spits shade. Yah collabed real good on this one. Hit meh up if you want to do one with me. Anytime playah!
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03-01-03, 09:51 AM | #3 | |
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IP:
i liked the colaboration between you to keep it up
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03-01-03, 12:39 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
thanks for the feed back
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03-01-03, 01:08 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
Yall Both Got Tha Underground Type Of Rhymes Which Are Good
To See And Hear To Certain Extents You Both Came Nice With It A Lotta People Should Be On...I Spun Away From Tha Style And Found Myself More In Tha Process...More Like Nas Or Az Influenced By Underground As Well Check Mines Out.... This Was Well Done Peace ~Content~ |
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03-01-03, 04:09 PM | #6 | ||
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IP:
thanks for your feed back flowz
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03-01-03, 04:16 PM | #7 | ||
Ya Mama's Favorite
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IP:
This was tight. it seem like ya'll both have similar styles and it made a good collab. I like the word usage on there and both ya'll flows was on point too. Good shit.
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03-01-03, 05:18 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
i think that shit was pretty tight yo nice job pz out
I think I'm magna prone, melting away in the act of Rome look past the throne, dust is collecting in the catacombs ^ nice |
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03-01-03, 09:01 PM | #9 | ||
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IP:
thank you guys for your feedback, i got alot more pieces we gonna write comin soon, KnightShade Productions baby! hehe
theres 9 members so far that aint on the net, rudeboy is 1 of em, were just a group of friends that like to chill and spit flows when we buzzed out of our minds im also recruiting for internet heads, it aint a record label or anything, its just a crew. (website comin soon)
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