im the type to get right to the belt...and start fightin himself..//
shootin inner lightning size belts to watchin the ice inside melt...//
Twice winners prized belts priced "sinner eyes delt"...
my life is a thinner sized shelf that hide my inner life well...//
well...in a little sized shell...ima quitter...why lie..//
im a sinner..might die...but live to get the biggest rise felt...//
stuck from the beginning...what the fuck...someone is innocent..//
not me...im probly gunna be hung in a minute..//
drunkin inebriate...stuck in a T.V set...//
sitcom...where no one hits moms..and no *fuckin* invented yet//
there parents drove oldsmobiles...my parent drove old mobiles...//
with sheered gears...weird steering and old curroded wheels//
i had cold and stolen meals...that were old and growin scales//
cooked on a broken stove that only worked when the roman hailed
but forget the past..yea it was hard to last back then...//
sleepin in trash packed cans....but im not sad...//
this is what happens in the life of a bad black man....//

i got 65 posts?....i had like 500 when i was here last year..nwo i come back for the first tiem with 65..?...whatever

this was very weak barely made sense

im the type to get right to the belt...and start fightin himself..//
shootin inner lightning size belts to watchin the ice inside melt...//


what the fuck did this mean ?

nice imagry and all but not really feelin ya lines good flow but didnt understand half of wtf you were sayin and the topic says your life wtf does this have to do with your life just my opinion

heavy on the multis, maybe a little too heavy coz it seems you sacrificed making sense at points in order to fit them in. good flow and great imagery definately good work.

so keep posting.

Dr. Suess; and The Foundation for Jerry's Special Kids would be very proud of you....good job on the wack shit you wrote here....




Peace...
1.......

Ps: work on it DR. SUESS...u wack bitch

Ha, Rawdeadly criticizin but yet , I still didn't see a verse he dropped. Nigga, first learn how to rhyme (to Raw) before you start criticizin. And if you can rhyme, prove it you lil' pussy.

I checked out your posts and never once have you told someone their rhyme was good, so it's obvious, you don't know what you be talkin about and you want attention. So you go around criticizin other nigga'z rhymes cuz you have no life.

PUSSY, YOU NEED A LIFE AND YOU NEED A GIRL CUZ SOMETHIN IS OBVIOUSLY MAKIN YOU MAD AT LIFE.

Not true at all Justin Timberlake

stop cock joggin me and get better at your rappin...
stop worrin about me and if i got a girl or not.....i mean you was born right?...hahahaha


Peace.....
1.........



Ps: your just another Mad rapper...u still wack...hahaha

well, somethin is wrong cuz YOU HAVE A WHOLE LOT OF ISSUES. I can careless what they are, but then stop bombin on everybody you DICK SUCKIN faggot. Pussy, ya only talent is suckin dick.

stop the beef, start the peace

oh yeah.............................................. ... UN's verse was... lacking...







peace








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