Stay Strong

as i fight the darkness in the shadows of the night/
im blind to see without any of my sight/
fear doesn't affect the inner soul of my fate/
cause i got the power to internaly retaliate/
i take what i got in my siezing reach/
securing with integrity; honor; hones-ty/
so be strong, never be weak/
or be tricked and taken, straight into defeat/
in the state of mind, you can fight the evil/
that huants the good, the young, the beautiful/
i got the power to overthrow my enslaved demon/
to bring the soul assassin its granted freedom/

now like i said in this rhyme/
so when i say this quoted, "Life Will Go On"/
you can't be weak, you have to Stay Strong.

Inspired by Tupac Amaru Shakur

something uplifting is always good and good that
you wont let de evils bring you down homie

at this point in time my girl should read somethin like
this cause im worried about her...this was short but alright

~Content~

sittin here makin' ends, thinkin on trends, friends comin' and goin, less than faithfulness showin', growin up late, replacing trust with hate, givin' and givin' and all i'm getting is take, break my heart and break my spirit, fear it every day, still i play, trade my pride for moments inside ur mind, be kind to my delicate nature, i hate ur walls, knock them down and i'll take the fall, all the blame, feed the flame and get burnt to ashes, i remain passive, i can't believe this long i've lasted, thankful and amazed, glory in a beautiful blaze.....

Nicely done...

...had a certain sense smoothness to it....with a bit of personal depth to add one....

...complemented with a fair amount of rawness and power...

...respect...

check my post to this thing you call poetry

this suxs