Like the drunk man starrgering away from the bar, i stumble around and shout at the stars,
life seems to be slipping away, god keeps throwing things my way,
I wanna drink this bottle and never come back, drink away as the memories attack,
there aint no pride in suicide, i'm losing my stride, in my rhymes i cant confide,
nothings all around me and i cant see it, i wanna be it,
never feel emotion never feel pain, past events have stained the brain,
i'd much rather had been aborted, this pain i just cant afford it,
i'd love to swap places and faces with other races, i just cant keep up with lifes paces,
im sick and tired of the earthly madness, i wanna die and sleep on heavens matress,
you think world world 3's going on in afghanistan, why dont you take a look at my fam,
welfare checks, collecting debts, but i cant fret,
i try and get it all out on the paper sheet, but the flow, weaker than weak, future, bleakest of the bleak,
life problems gotta have a solution, my mind full of media pollution, i arrange my execution,
i pull the trigger and theres no turning back, but its the end of wack, i feel my flow coming back,
its too late and the bullet pierces the flesh, my last though is,
how did i get into this mess...

ya'll on sleeping pills? just uppin....

that was hot dude, the only thing i could say that it needs is a little more flow.....but the word play was fine and so was the vocab....

"i'd love to swap places and faces with other races, i just cant keep up with lifes paces,"

thats stuck in my head! very tight

YOU SAID IT ALL
THE FLOW,(IS) WEAKER THAN WEAK
UHMEMBER ME?

bluvd shut up... im not the one posting 2 line battle verses... step to someone thats at your level (its hard to find someone that wack but i think you can)...