and there's nothing that ya'll can show me fam...
rapbattles now knows this haters' more 'pu$$y' than 'Josies" band...
Ya'll can't reach the stee's, touch the title...defeat me please...
It's locked, you couldn't open it with Alicia's keys...
keep typin ya'll bullsh!t up and preach ya smoked out trash...
My registration date will be each time I spit on your flames an' beat ya a$s....
u'll meet with the devil...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel....
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem tryna compete on this level...
you'll hit the street, soon as you hear that squeak from the metal...
f*ck peace, our beef isn't settled...you'll be in pieces and pebbles...
You're whack! A bunch of crap sorted in rhymes...
I feel like a red margin...how I slaughter your lines...at border...
It's sorta...indirect, but take it per-son-al...
every defensive line's in this verse-for-you...
you'll prolly be on that winterfresh commer-cial too...
I guess battles with 'boring' verses aint work-for-you...
'Poor' b*stard's worthless...I just fix up some donations....
add the date..ya name, R.I.P and 'ripped' in your location...
don't Lose Yourself like eminem...moving in circles, back to the start...
You only get ONE SHOT...you f@ggot, and that's through the heart....holla


Just Pissed on them HATERSSSS......remember they tha ones make u greater......

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ya had sum decent punches in there.LoL i used dat Josie line tha longest tyme ago,still sound good.U jus lettin em kno,I cant blame ya buddy.Stay ^
-Avi

Thnx this wus just lil freeing like i said.....puttin some emotions into it.....but holla if any1 has comments or give me some pointers na'mean

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i totally felt that the whole way through, and i can see where your coming from.....that whole verse was ill......keep this shit flowing

yo, i liked it

THNX FO THE FEEDBACKS..........yo i apreciate it

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Hot spit, I was feelin' this shit. I'm uppin' you, i'll be checkin' your other threads. Keep an eye out for my posts.

ENIG foho dawg....i got you.....thnx fo the love WUN

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Yo youve been here 4 months,and won one battle/actin like you a champ but i aint flattered/LYRICAL_GANSTA Im a lyricaldemon,hot and steamin/like ya bitches pussy when im bustin semine/concrete flows style hard as cement/think i can be barred come and see me/leave ya scarred breathin wheezy/acin like you squeeze metal/and bust a heavy beretta/but you aint ready for da wrath im gon give ya/leave lead embedded in ya liver/watch ya body shake and quiver/no 9-11 or 1-8-7-, body thrown in da river/im laughin, you screamin/im blastin,you dreamin/eternal sleep/blaze like an inferno,torch wit heat/

HOLLA BACK YA FAKE MC

HAHAHA YO DEMON OR WUTEVA YO NAME IS NEGGA THIS IS OPEN MIC......NOT THE BATTLE AREA HOMO TEXTUAL BITCH BUT AMA SET BATTLE UP

LYRICAL G VS THE GAY DEMON...LOL


YO UPPUN ON THIS PIECE ALWAYS SOME FOOLS ACTIN HARD BEHIND THEIR SCREEN..HAHAHA

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