Guess what i am?????


my neck is long with my whole head hollow
peel my cap back to watch liquid follow
not tough to swallow but a headache tommorow
drown your sorrows with each taste from my dome
or celebrate the moment, im served best not alone
shown as the life of parties, at times cold to the bone
not good with heat or being left on my own
im best to own, cant borrow my company
savor my presence, before you start dumping me
too much is no good, have moderation to some degree
pay attention after atempting each one in front of me
if you have to pee, go now, then return to my side
im a good dancer if you can handle my stride
i might make you seem stronger by increasing your pride
inside, make you feel happy or mad both at the same time
i toy with emotions when there taken for a ride
all depends if you handle or hide
trust me when i say my personality is addicting
we need to hang out if you need some convincing
ill make you nervous, speech gets conflicting
sketchy who i mix with, results could be sickening
but that is neither here nor there, youll be beckening soon
right now im glistening in light projected by the moon
my owner wrapped around me, sweet & sour being consumed
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stuck in the lips of a bitch,
imma Corona getting my dick sucked in Cancun!!!!

Im off to Cancun on Monday.... Peace

You lucky mothafucker! I've been trying to hit Cancun for a while now... the beaches, the girls, the parties, the girls!... goddamm it... but I still got to stock up way more dough to go... have fun kid...

You this metamorphesis shit was hot... I've heard rhymes like one is a gun, money, crack... now liquor... shit was pretty creative... had mad hummor too... although it did sort of get simple at times and some rhymes were better then others... this shit should not be slept on for creativity alone... if the flow was better paced at times, and you had more wordplay up there, this would have been real tight... Peace

I think this piece is hot.I think worplay is tight and the vocab is on point.The flow could of been a little better,but this is piece is hot to death.Keep on shinning playa.

APPRECIATED. PEACE

This shouldnt be slept on

yo hot piece, clever and the flow was nice
u should record it
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i say a garaft

THIS PIECE IS ON FIRE............HOT HOT!!!!......Burnin flames..lol

Yo nice shit Rich.....

ps: my tutoring sessions helped..lol Am fuckin witcha

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This was dope.....I like how U organized it and went thru tha whole piece wit it.....Keep it up man....peace

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