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Old 03-07-03, 05:15 PM   #1
SeeKret
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In Wit tha new

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I aint no gangsta grippin my nine in tha night
I aint no mutha fukkin thug nigga lookin to fight
Im just that nigga tryin to hold his own
Keepin my ass in tha zone and findin new bitches bone
You see my face, and you think that im frontin
But you dont know what im wantin, all you niggas are fair game
and it my ass whos huntin.
Cuz you cant beat me defeat me or even meet me.
If youre steppin to tha mic ima bomb ya ass completely
I may be new at the game but i aint got nothin to fear.
Cuz once i spit at you niggas ima be rookie of tha year.
I dint practice this shit, this is freestyle that youre hearin
And when i drop a few more its gonna be my ass that you fearin.


Holla Atcha boy.
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Old 03-07-03, 08:33 PM   #2
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Yo man, that shit aint bad, got more flow than most shit bein put up out here, some nice rhymes man, keep it up!
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Old 03-08-03, 02:29 AM   #3
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thats a quality start, for an early days, you work hard enough n u could probably get paid.. lookin foward to seein ur next works. peace out...
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Old 03-08-03, 02:38 PM   #4
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not bad for starters,ya flow wuz kept consistent.Add more multis next tyme.Stay ^
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Old 03-08-03, 11:15 PM   #5
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It was good.I know you going to do better so just keep elevatin
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Old 03-09-03, 04:05 AM   #6
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you only got 5 posts and in your rhyme you said you a beginner... and that was dope... natural talent... and unlike most people who first start out... you didnt "peel caps and cock gats"... much respect to you for that... keep rhymin
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Old 03-10-03, 01:27 AM   #7
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vote up
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Old 03-10-03, 09:28 PM   #8
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thanks and headz up to everybody who gave input. All love All trust.
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