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imma drop mah verse in a lil while holla

Aight I'll Drop Tommarow I'm Going out Of Town Tonight

ya aight wit tha flow, but ya ain't touchin mine/
hittin ya wit shells that will leave ya chest stuck 2 ya spine/
look at this wanna be hard nigga/
ass so weak ya break ya damn finger tryin 2 pull a trigga/
nigga, imma suregon wit a double barrel shotty/
can and will remove any vital organ from ya body/
im focused when i take a couple of shots of tha remy/
and have ya body doin semis, from hollow tips of a semi/
that automatically puts another round in tha chamber fa u 2 recieve/
have mah gun pourin out more shells than anyone would believe/
because ill have ya body mangled, and tangled like ya ass was in a wreck/
im not goin 2 get 2 complex wit mah vocab cause i can see u small on intellect/
just cause u come wit multitudes of lines don't mean that u one of the elite/
nigga u need 2 leave rap alone, like BUSH needs to be impeached/

holla

All This talk About Guns, Nigga only uzis You've Seen Were in Movies/
I'm sick and tired of battling whack ass jay-z groupies/
Claim to be a gansta nigga I think yo ass lying/
Because I asked you what a heater was and your ass said a household appliance/
You in danger nigga when you see me then a flash from the chamber son/
I carry Spiked Bullets with each one of these lyrics on the tip to aim at ya/
Cuz I disperse bullets so quickley, one bullet turns to fifty/
They lift you ass ten feet, and crucify you to the ceiling/
I got burns in my stomach, becaue i'm tuckin a hot gun/
Some nigga said some dumb shit and I left another body a "Hot One"/
you aint a suregon Nigga, you a virgin with a shotty/
Just leave guns alone, there for big boys, your better off taking classes of karate/
My Rhymes didn't even have to touch yours, cuz yours just ran and got scary/
They was like japanese souljahs, when my rhymes took over they commited hari kari(Suicide)/
Aight Uppin

Whew! Writers Block Is a muthfucka

hot one, u got more guns in ur verse than bars kid, i like varity. imma give this one to steve digga but that first line u kicked had me weak hot one "aight with the flow, but u aint touchin mine// hittin ya with shells that will leave ur chest stuck to your spine//" but u still loose, mix that shit up a lil.

Aight Uppin

diz waz an iight battle, but i think Steve took diz in hiz opener:



daaaamn, dat waz a murder rite dere

besidez dat, i think Steve had harder punches n a betta rhyme scheme.

vote=Steve

Thanx, Still Uppin

Cmon We need some votes

we still need votes

uppin

ayo steve da first part of ya rap was hot ta def son no doubt! but u keep da same level of punches afta. i thought u could have been mo deadly, if u would have got harder and harder wit it.

hot 1.........damn........u had some shit, u just keep gettin betta wit it every line. altho u took da chance of goin first,and catchin steves first 4 bar combo. u still some how put up a verse that held its ground.
my vote=hot-one

I'm not really sure... steve's shit was good especially at the start... but like fithy said you didn't keep advancin' you held your ground after the first few lines...so I'm-a go with him and give my vote to hot-one... kid you can't use your best punches right at the stare, nawmsay'n.. peace

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