Title: New

what time has brought to this life of mine/
i looked upon this world, adolescence was fine/
but now a different time, a whole new place/
a new appearance, a new face/
behold the responsibility put upon you/
the teachings of life, you must remain true/
keep your head up, there are things to look foward too/
the wind might blow, the trees might shake/
the snow will fall, freeze over the lake/
life has these cycles of change/
with a new begining you can rearange/
as you stare into the eye of the beholder/
do you see a new perspective of living/
or do you see the same old curious human being?/

can i get some feed bak please aight holla bak 1

i like it when u keep things short...more intense, more passionate...and i like the way u ended it with a question...like a question never asked is a question never answered...
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