in pitch black and utter silence invisibly against the darkness
chameleon emerges into the night dragging his previous victims carcass
the strength of a million soldiers all within a single warrior
your rhymes sound like shit, but theyre a whole lot cornier
I make jokes before battling folks just to sass my victims
the ones who are always quick to come with the negative criticisms
my sword thru your mouth and out the back of your head, causes injury
you were'nt dead and pled for me to kill u as I left u in your misery
racin thru the battle field hoppin over the next casualty
advancin on the most untouchable enemy emcee gradually
goin for the throat, now nothin can stop me
anyone who think's they can is just retarded probably
who could even compete with me, the worthiest who's curious
the next contender I'm gonna beat so bad it'll just make him furious
my competitors get so angry when they lose they wanna cry
in other words, your all fucked, that's what I'm tryin to imply

tight with a captial T... hahah gotta love this line
"in pitch black and utter silence invisibly against the darkness
chameleon emerges into the night dragging his previous victims carcass "
and this one...
"the strength of a million soldiers all within a single warrior
your rhymes sound like shit, but theyre a whole lot cornier"
those were ill... keep rhymin

thanks for the inspiration inspire

does any one else have any comments or complaints?
don't keep um to yourself, speak the fuck up!!!!

SICK WIT IT......thats my worddddddddddddd

WUn

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shits straight the first 2 bars word udderly dope then it fell up the vocab and ideas. PEEP MY 9-11 JOINT and REPLY
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yeah I know what your talking about co-faxe

uppin for more opinions on the flow
I'm out.

WESTSIDE

m8 u cant emcee,
especially not like me,
im da publics number 1 enemy,
they jus jeleous da muva fuckas cant test me,
we'll start u on ur 123,
den move on 2 ur abc, then u cant take a look in da dictionary so u can finally learn how 2 fuckin mc,
ur rhymes sound like u think ur tough,
u aint shit and has any1 eva told u yo mommas proper rough?
it aint all that bad, so man dont be sad its not ur fault u aint got a dad,
ur a test tube baby, but jus mabye jus hopefully yo momma will find sum1 dat likes a dirty ladie,
so dats da end ov da lyrics from da true emcee so catch ya l8er blud and make sure u get bk 2 me

I've never laughed so hard in all my life as I did at that attempt
to diss me soundin like your really lyrically battle exempt
I don't even need to keep going since you've already been pimped

WESTSIDE

mc_nme?? one post and coming out dissin? ay check bluvd... he did that and look where that has gotten him... you wanna have a hate club stickied on open mic?? then keep posting shit like that....

i thought this was a decent piece... mostly well written ... whats with this line though..
I make jokes before battling folks just to sass my victims
the ones who are always quick to come with the negative criticisms
my sword thru your mouth and out the back of your head, causes injury
you were'nt dead and pled for me to kill u as I left u in your misery"

it kinda through me off with that coma in there... dont know how you were trying to move the flow

i liked it though.. nice

"

whys it titled Westside

"cause you's a bitch if you ain't hollerin out that WESTSIDE"
words from COUGNUT (R.I.P)

yeah I just put westside as the name because I was high and was just like...

WESTSIDE!!!!!

FOSHO REPPNG DIEGO TO THE BAY I SEE.....619

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