another love rhyme for the lost dove....

ever since i've started writin rhymes, cant get you outta my lines,
you always there like the stain on my shirt, my heart always hurts,
this stain i want to remain, i cant complain,
i enjoyed your company for a very short time, thats why im writing this rhyme,
the time i would like to extend, i wanna be with you well past the depends,
you no longer have another lover, over this topic i hover, and i'll uncover,
your true feelings for me, you know you wanna be with the most talented emcee,
i'll make you smile just for the sake of seein it, you presence, i love bein in it,
i'll do anything to brighten your life, if we was 22 you'd be my wife,
but im only 16 and i've got 6 more years until then, im sick of being a friend,
maybe we can pass the time together, we can make it through this rainy weather,
so what do you say hun?, do you wanna stay or pack up and run?,
would you settle down with a poor emcee, i aint got much but im sellin love for free,
i'll make you a deal and i'll sell it half price, throw in a bag of rice and secret spice,
i'd treat you better than anyone out there, its true love girl dont be scared,
no other guy can compare, i paid my fare, i'll always care, you know theres love in my stare,
tryin to send you some important information, we was made to be together ever since creation,
i dont even know why it took this long, its coming to an end this song,
I'm inspire the broke emcee, and i'm askin "will you settle down with me?"

Bruther, that shit was fucken deep, D.O.P.E SHIT!!!! All your rhymes on this chick have been heart felt man, this rhyme hits it, straight to the point! A new creative work man, elevatin to the full, keep this hot shit up!!!!

Peace

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i know ya'll love the bluvd hate post... but check this one...
just uppin...

hey wake up man... you see that??
you see that up there?!
oh its just my rhyme!

....uppin....

woooo!!! put on your gas mask cause everyones been affected by sleeping gas!!!

haha dogg.. dope shit fo sure !!
peace out...

man this was a deep piece dude.....the whole thing just flowed and it made complete sence....totally ill piece!!! keep it up!