25 bar max spit whut eva u want none of ya boys can vote votes count when u explain why you picked your winnder no stupid shit

deadline for verse is tomorrow 10pm

fuck that 10 pm tmorrow????????? r u retarded i can write a book by then deadline at 11 pm tonite holla bak ill have my shyt up soon 1

whut eva prick

rap vocabulary leaving you in a state of confusion/
havin your brain black n blue after a lyrical bruising/

you take lyrical "shots" at me ill "dodge" like a "viper"/
and "scope" you out like the kennedy killing "sniper"/

ma words spin a "hurricane" like "Ruben Carter"/
you'll be tongue tied, left with bigger lips than "S. CARTER"/ (jayz)

your rhymes stand no chance, they aint thorough/
im the devil, ull think i got more horns than an "ecko" "rhino"/

like the "exorcist" ill "contort" your spine/
but lyrics leave you like a chiropractor ina state of recline/

i give firemen jobs by spitten "fire"/
and give "goodyear" business cause cats hear ma stuff n blow up like they riden on "firestone tires"/

so as this kid pretends to stand tough/
behind the computer screen he already has is hands up/

look how i blew this coward away/
ill be nice though and end this with a FUCK YOU but have a nice day/

Check

i'ma hand you an L like i'm gone smoke you up
16 shellz smoke you up
u suck an swollow bull shit rhymes
wouldn't get claps on KIDS at the apollo
ya chump ass gets toked like marlboro
from queens nigga you serious
u must be family of ja rule cuz i smell pussy
you from N.Y an fag like mike piazza
spit at u wit the llama betta skip cities like a brooklyn dodger


Tha Cartel nigga CT's thrown like whoa
i'll leave ya face on ya jam master jay shell toes
keep a long shank to bang you ya fram a catch
big brakes like grant hills ankle ya body gets
stoned to shamble you aced in the world ya lifes
a gamble wit three dice CEE LOW fucked up ya lifes matrix
like neo when my barettas re load
learn to play ya postion stick to X'S an O's
yea nigga i'ma nice MC oops an i finger fuck
x ecution the pussy like TWEET fucked ya self
not gangsta leave home wit ya bb pistol on ya shelf
the first mc in the i made over the net piss on him self nigga

YO MAN I LOVE HOE U TOOK LINES FROM 8 MILE the lines u bite

so as this kid pretends to stand tough/
behind the computer screen he already has is hands up/
(from emienm the last battle ofthe movie the line was like this he stand tough notice this guy did not have his hands up)


look how i blew this coward away/
ill be nice though and end this with a FUCK YOU but have a nice day/(he took this form the dude wit the wife beater) stupid i have this movie on bootleg

yo dog i didnt kno that ma fault u can take off that line i didnt kno ma fault dude i made that but w/e didnt kno he made that in his verse in the movie...w/e ma fault holla bak 1

uppen votes

nah fuck that my bad shit u knew it came from the movie nigga
you thought i wouldn't catch it you a biter now suffer for it

yo im tellin u straight up i didnt kno but w/e ont believe me lets just see how this goes down holla bak 1

OK, X does have a line from 8 mile. He says he didn't know, and it really doesn't matter. I wasn't feeling broadways verse. So based on X's verse minus the 8 mile line, he took this. But X, next time just be more careful what you spit, and make sure it isnt a mainstream rhyme. Vote X

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hmm aiight aiight can't aruge wit that ain't like the verse ok

1-0 X keep'em comin

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votes pease holla bak 1 ^^^^^