See me? You can't see me, let alone talk violent to me//
That's like a blind man tryin' to see a silent movie//
Destroying microphones, it's like my rhymes be runnin' for laps//
I gotta buy a new mic everytime I'm done with a track//
Stunnin' the wack, my stats so high it's like I'm blunted on rap//
But my lungs is intact and spit heat just like the guns that you lack//
Trusted on wax, cuz I mean every fuckin' word that I say//
Yall ghostwriters aint sick you just be lurkin' in graves//
I'm perverted, insane, and could get fuckin' murdered today//
You just haven't heard of my name because I'm jerkin' ya chain//
Do you really want beef since you started to talk?//
If there's a fly without wings would we call it a walk?//
Yall tend to exhibit that you don't spit it this exquisite//
This is the best business, and I'm ya new C-E-O//
You couldn't rhyme circles around me if you was Cheerios//
When you hear me flow, you gonna think that you was dreamin'//
Cuz I make ya skin pail like you was drinkin' too much semin//

i just needed some frustration to take out.......not intended to offense anyone....my bad if it does....

Yo dogg, this shit is alright, there's some good wordplay, good rhymin but yeah I know you was takin out frustration but next time, spit on a subject other than just talkin yo self up. But shit is tight for startin out. Keep it up baruther.

Peace Out!!!

__________________
<center></center><center>Click Here.</center>

yeah man that was coo

nice lines nice flow too it

keep reppin

This joint was hot yo. These two lines: "You really want to beef since you started to talk// If a fly had no wings, would we call it a walk?//", that line about the fly was funny as shit yo. You got original lyrics, i'm feelin' this piece.

WOW nice shit and shake them haters of you..playa

__________________

i'm feelin this too yo,
nice flow

See me? You can't see me, let alone talk violent to me//
That's like a blind man tryin' to see a silent movie//
Destroying microphones, it's like my rhymes be runnin' for laps//
I gotta buy a new mic everytime I'm done with a track//

them first four lines was hot as hell.

Big up.

thanks ya'll........

damn ni99a yo ni99az need get well cards up here yo. Im tellin you bra be easy man that shit was gangsta

nice kid....wordplay and mults on point

fo just startin out u got some nice lines
keep that shit up
peace out...

good job, I like ya spit here... Good to have you at RB playah, keep rippin' open mics with spit peeps will enjoy readin', not some herbished assed newbie shit...
Newbies just need to take notes.. Don't get me wrong newbies, I didn't say bite, take notes...

peace^^