Just a quick rap I written a few days ago.
Goes to the beat (50 Cent - Dont Push Me)

Please rate it honestly, thanks!


Why the fuck are we here
What is life for
How come i've never ever asked this question before
I gotta find out man, find out the reason for life
We get departed the unbilical cord cut with a knife
And why do people die at an earlier age
By a 12 pump and gauge, pointing at there rib cage
Stage fright, yeh right, turn the page, goodnight
There scared to death to fight
They may not be in ya sight, but you know it's happing
All these tragic accidents, they've been put here for a reason
God obvoisly wants some people to stop breathing
Watching there sprit subliminally leaving the dead
Seeing the criminal activity entering babys heads
Gun slinging, raping women, looting, shooting people in beds
20 years from birth they'll be in trouble with the feds
If they get a bad upbringing, parents saying there minging
Pissing them off, beating them up, brusing them up and singing
The parents are 16 give um' a chance, but they cant, be bothered with it
Trying to be famous, but why, whats the point in it
They get the money then they die, but leave you deats and shit
Even though they made that much, they should of respected it
Somebody help me out, I dont understand fully
And why growing up in school you'll get fuckin bullied
Whats the deal with that, you'll never hit um' back
Cause they have cousens and brothers who are ready to attack
And of course you know that, it's like a 6th sence
In the back of ya brain, it just dont make sence
It could drive ya insane, the fellings inmence
To the point where you hit the top
Then you think FUCK IT, THIS SHIT'S GON' STOP!

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This was better then the uther piece i jes wread by u, it had more feelin but u need to elevate ure concepts and word-play to make ure verses shine more...

Kepp on droppin.......

ps were in uk u frum?

Omega--Dragon Wrekordz

^^ what is the uk forum?

UK as in UNITED KINGDOM......shit can u read?

I live near northampton, by Notts do you mean Nottingham

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yup