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Lifes been shitty but i aint down 4 sum pity time 2 knuckle down n get gritty damn i aint even got the money to get pissy, alotta rappaz wanna diss me shit i left home n ma mams wont even miss-me i'm movin frum place to place might aswell call me a gipsy but i'll pull through lets see if this new lifes gonna test me.......


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but i wont let shit get me down and mess-wimme/im stomping up the church screaming 'PRIEST BLESS ME'/please best be a word i dont needa say often/cuz i hate K's family so much one day imma pop 'um/theres no way i can stop 'um from hurting their one son/only grandson...you'd think they'd be spoiling him rotton/instead they be spoiling his life til he hits rock bottom/they laughing in our faces whilst flippin the bird/i swear to god our life stories aint like nuthin you ever heard...


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say word, ma fukkin grandmas even shittin on me n i got a lil sista who's becomin ma mams man its so shitty, i aint even wearin ma cross god aint helpin me so i gues i gotta pay the cost to b ma own boss like snoop, i wish i had a deep bassline that i could loop n i aint gone feel sorry 4 maself n let ma lip droop all i wanna do is shoot but not a gat ma mouth off thaz why i'm pourin out ma feelins on this microsoft, chat? na fuk that i'd rather smash up a car witta-bat to get my anger out yet i'm still left thinkin 'whats ma life actually about?' maybe i was cursed-at-birth-but-1st-lets-praise-the-earth hold up fuk the earth i'm entrapped within prisms n i dunno what the fuks in these blurred visions i gotta make a decision on whether or not i wanna split wit ma family, call that shit division........


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call it whatever the fuck you like dont mean i stop wishin for the day your family stops bitchin/your little sister stops snitchin/im flinching with tension breaking through to your dimensions of the real meaning on 'normality'/my formality is unfigerable to the state it'll send this young kidda to kill/strike you in ya head a couple times til ya blood starts to spill/but on tha real...im kinda cool at times im more than chilled/to get as stone cold as me you gun' need to sleep in a freezer/but wait til ya backs turned imma lock that shit an watch ya have a seizure/i dont believe ya making fake ass promises/so dont look surprised when i drop a diss on all y'all lil groupie kids/lil bitches speaking like they g's/looking out the window seeing 9 year olds dressed in skirts above their knees/what the fucks this world coming to? this is the generation what it depends on/looking at half the muthafuckas about i cant even begin to comprehend one thing from another/sick shits happening im so scared for my lil brother/im starting to understand my mother when she says stay undercover/dont look twice at that motherfucka/one looks pushing it...second one means they got a reason to shove ya...fuck alla this im sick of not being to go out in the street...next person to come within a hundred yards is about to get their ass BEAT


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For real, lets up this shit to Another level cuz Dane bowers said Your outta yo mind n i'm outta ma soul ive been out in the cold ive got stories untold i wish i could take ma life n re-mould if the truths told the Truth hurts n to darkness i'm so addicted whoever thought ma life could b written in a thousand words or drawn in a picture but i dont wanna b a fixture thats why i write these skriptures n come equipped wit lyrix to add to the mixture to create a lethal fusion combined with mental intrusion ive gotta defuse ma issues wipe away the tears with tissues my hearts been missused an i aint very fawkin amused thats why ive got this ammunition to spit fire n be heard is my lifes mission if only i could wish one-time i'd take away the pain n have a life thats plain..........


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shits driving me insane/if i could have a tissue passed i'd try and wipe away the pain/but im left scarred with the stains that remain tapped deeper into my membrane/past the scull and inbedded in my brain/but i know i'll gain the frame of mind to become something and reign the majority of the lame/the ones who've lost hope and lost pay/i'll never change, always stay stuck in my ways my mindstates at a great pace/you cant dispute i got the create-ivity to pass the blame onto K/say he pushed me into this shit and laugh in y'alls face/when i get away with the rape of the alphabets race/imma lace ya last traces and put ya in ya fuckin 'place'...


Holla.....

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thats shit was ill. real good the flow was 100% on point through most of the song, structure was ok the vocab was good
8/10
real nice yall need to keep up wid that collab yall got some chemistry

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Yawl sleep too much still....

Yo got the flow boys, I like this shit, rhymin tighter than most!

Peace out!!

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SiniKil is female thnx 4 reply tho....

lol... well done then both of you! i might have to take you up on that collab offer... holla at a broke rapper with a pm before i cant pay for internet anymore!

This thread was aight... nothing too special. It was pretty nice though, good idea.

originality for sure on this one, vocab was aight
keep elevatin everyday with ever line in yo rhymes..
peace out...

this was pretty ill nice topic

good verses has some nice vocab an wordplay jus work a bit on da flow


keep it up 8/10

thnx 4 the reps keep em comin..

this was nice actually
i felt it more than ive felt most of the things ive read since i came thru. love is love. keep up

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that was ill!! felt the flow the whole way! keep it up!

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