YO I SPIT LIKE CAMELS DO EXCEPT I ANT GOT NO HUMPS/YOU NIGGAZ IS RAPPIN LIKE YOU WAS KIN TO FOREST GUMP/I'LL HIT U WIT BATS AND WATCH YA KNEES BUCKLE/THEN TIE YA GIRL UP WIT YARN WHILE I ASS FUCK'ER/YALL NIGGAZ SPITTIN TOO GRIMEY NEED TO CHANGE YA STYLES/U STRUGGLE TO WRITE BARS LIKE IT WAS PART OF GREEN MILE/I GOT COFFEE AND CAKE WONT U TRY STAYING A WHILE/NO FORCE FROM LAWS I MAKE LEGITTAMENT ABUMS/ MY VOICE SO LOUD IT DRAW CROWDS BIGGER THAN MALCOLMS/IM ALWAYS HOT SHIT/NO MATTER THE OUTCOME/U CAN TASTE THE SHIT JUST ASK YA BITCH WHEN MY DICK CUM/SWALLOWING KIDS LIKE SHE DIDNT ALREADY HAVE SOME/ITS LIKE TAKING BIN LADEN AND HOLD HIM FOR RANSOM/POP TWO IN HIS CHEST AND KILL TWO OF HIS GRANDSONS/

honestly...this could be improved. work on ya lyrics mostly but you could also improve ya wordplay and multis. that's pretty much all i have to say

Yo, did u go to the Bluvd school of rhyming or are u bluvd's new identity??

Peace Out!!!!

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what up bluvd! lol... just playin... aight first of all press enter, and press caps lock and turn it off... keep rhymin

"YO I SPIT LIKE CAMELS...." then it sort of fell off, yo like thes cats said, you should press enter, make that bar form verse so they can understand you better... flow here was pretty good.. I'll give you that... to the rhymes could use more work.... for a first post, it wasn't that bad... keep workin on it man

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