how many bars you want fucker

10 15
3 is a k.o
irl spit cause i gotta go out
and by da way only 1 verse

go for it then man
and ill hit you wiv my jam
you'll just be another fan

I rip souls even before there dead
shoot u to quick dnt matta no one cares bout this new newbie head/1
thats it u brown bread u corny son of a bitch
u snitch u fake u gay this is to fast init/2
come bak when u have actually won 1 battle u cookie crum
do i have 2 have it in lamins terms u wack son!!/3
ive looked at ur battles and u heads so big its about to hemridge
i bet u a fat fucker i cant hit u bitch u look pregnant/4
how the fuck can u call me a fucker u fucker u 2 imiture
i cant believe iam lowering me standerds shit told u its quick police already have u chalked/5
see man this ante fun for me
u nuthin ur a nother name to me u pussy/6
p dre more like b jay u so scared u hairs turn grey
like some steven king flick just go away and pray/7
today is ur las day on this earth
fuck this shit u worthless piece of shit no point of u having a birth/8
u lifeless no point to be living
iam ripping u up like a fat man eating kuntuki fried chicken/9
this is like busta cause its rieymes galore
see u on the edge of brink of living and iam safe in thew core/10



sorry bout the spelling

thats wack

your lyrics are shitty, its such a pitty
who told you, you could fuck wiv the P-Ditty
no not diddy it a little ditty
thicky shitty you a little picky see how many words i rhyme wiv this pricky kitty//
you think you a player but your just a failure
you need to go and find you saviour and do us all a favour//
i'll stab you in your vocabulary box
and watch you while you try and cough it up
you just another fox
now who's callin the shots//
im laughing at you
youve bittin off more than you can chew
now im going to finish you
and beat you over the head with this cue//
you need to go back to school learn how to spell
then you wont look such a fool, man you better off living in hell//
i dont know how you won a battle
they must have been rappin in a skattle//
im too smart for you
you should get a job pushin carts around in a supamart//
you better beware cause im out to kill you
now who's pullin out their hair
ive gave you a fair warning so take care now//
your life is like a fun fair
so many ups and downs
people playing you off like you a clown
now you on one of your downs and all you can do is frown
see im now wearing the crown//
i'll knock you out like lewis did tyson
see im as strong as a byson
ready to fight some//
see im the boss
you better start to remorse
and figga out why you lost//

time to vote people
let me know who won this battle

man, was up wit all deez wack ass battles?
they both was do-doo, i thought liam sucked until i scrolled down and seen dat wackness of words. i give it to liam cuz he was wack too, but he controled da wackness. while p-ditty just was all ova wack.

my vote=liam

come on everybody, get your votes in

my vote goes 2 P DRE because his lines wer better his punches were harder n his flow was smoother

ah both flows were weird i got dres more.......overall its hard to judge but ill give it to dre kus he seemd to be on the pucnh tip abit more or trying

vote=p dre

Whew, this was not good guys.
I'm pretty sure I've seen liam come a lot better than this, too.
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liam:
Verse was just lazy.

"how the fuck can u call me a fucker u fucker u 2 imiture"
That's just a garbage line!
"lamins terms" "kuntuki fried chicken"
I'm sorry, but that shit has to take away from someone's credibility, doesn't it? Is that intentional?
Your flow is way off. See how the bars are so uneven?
In P Dre's longest line, it was a terrible terrible multi-line so it at least went up tempo to compensate for its length.

I really wasn't feeling any of the lines.
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P DRE:

"no not diddy it a little ditty
thicky shitty you a little picky see how many words i rhyme wiv this pricky kitty"

That's amazingly dumb. Why on earth would you include that?

"you think you a player but your just a failure
you need to go and find you saviour and do us all a favour//
i'll stab you in your vocabulary box
and watch you while you try and cough it up"

That's not too bad. Probably the piece of the battle.


"then you wont look such a fool, man you better off living in hell"
why not?:
cuz you have a knack to act a fool, you'll soon take up a spot in hell to dwell"

Just off the top of the dome. It might look longer, but I think it comes out sounding cleaner.

I'm sorry, I'm retarded, what does this mean:
"they must have been rappin in a skattle"?

you should get a job pushin carts around in a supamart//
That part of the verse is just so lousy. RHYME.

Overall... it wasn't a terrible verse. It had foundation. Plenty of prevalent newbie error.
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Unofficial vote=P DRE

Better flow. Shows a potential, I guess. I thought liam might, but after this... wtf? Elevation!

some shit
give it to p dre

looks like im 3-1 up chum

come on people 2 more votes and i won this battle so vote up