14 LINES, NO LESS N NO MORE
GOOD CLEAN BATTLE
NO FAVORITE PERSON VOTES




ILL GO 1ST.......

WIT A NAME LIKE KEENAN IT REMINDS ME OF KEL/
WACK RAPPER GET CLAPPED & SENT STR8 TO HELL/
FUNNY NIGGAS THINK THEY HOT & SHIT/
WHEN THEY REALLY FAGS THAT LOVE GOGGLIN DICK/
SPIT YA SHIT OR ARE U SCARED OF ME/
I AM VISIUALLY IMPARED SPARKIN HOT LIKE GLEEM/
GET OFF MY DICK I AINT GOT TIME FO TEENS/
IM LIKE EVIL CANEEVIL BY ANY NECESSARY MEANS/
ILL KILL A NIGGA STR8 POUND 4 A POUND/
HIT U WIT HEAVY WEIGHTS TA KNOCK YA ASS DOWN/
LOOK IMA GO EZ ON U/
IF I WAS SPITTIN HARD I'D PROBY PEE ON U/
14 LINES NO LESS N NO MORE/
WELL HERE U GOT U MOTHA FUCKIN WHORE/

so u hav 2 wins! U expect me 2 care?\\1 Your up against real shit now shit that "even you" cant bear! \\2
But ah gotta b fair, Dog u din even challange me\\3.Am gone for a month and u think u can handle me?\\3
Jus when will u c, that your spits resemble nursery rhymes\\4 whilst ah work ma ass off by doing mothafucking over time!\\5
Ah don even know u but ah can tell your aprick\\6 , your lyrics are made of lies\\7 coz its you how likes the fucking dick!\\8
U make me sick!\\9 Cum bck when u learn how 2 spit!\\10 U assemble sum words that rhyme\11 and mistakinly call it a rap\\12,your shit bores me 2 hel\\13l jus hang on and ill hav a nap\\14

Ah think this was hite but am 2 tired 2 cum up wit gd stuuf but it should top yours dog

QB sniper gets my vote.
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