Oh my God
Im chillin at my comp
Thinkin bout Nelly
And his Errrrl Force Ones that stomp
I know I suck but I dont give a shit
People in my school are constantly riding my dick
If I had a venereal disease would I even have a bitch?
I doubt it
Perhaps I'm a pimp
But even more I'm a diplomat
Instead of selling Pokemon cards
I like to slang the weed bagz
My eyes are way burning
And my ass is getting raw
From sitting on my bed too long
You might need try to refreeze me
Because my skills are just too hard to unthaw


(( Im just playing around, hehe, boredom and shyt, noones online!!!! )))

for real, i didnt see much right with this one... no real set rhyme scheme, you need to work on vocab, flow, etc... keep rhymin

hah i just said i was just fuckin around. sure i aint MUCH better than what i put but i knew that when i put it down.. i was being silly dog.. but thanks for replying anywayz