Nice skillz, Never liked pills, He writes ill, Cold-blooded
Heart's ice filled, Thinkin' bout tha next mic that I might kill
Despite deals, Crooked card games played in tha alley
Crack headed Sally, Wanted sum dick, Introduced me 2 her pally
Mary, That's when it got scary, Cuz I never liked 'em hairy
But fell in luv wit this one, Made me leave sum niggaz Nautica airy
Harry, Cleaner than most, Hit up his crib, Got ran for his smoke
I thought it was a joke, Shorty shit-stain asked Pedro to give her a poke
I said nope, Not even on dope, Wanted 2 fucc Harriet in tha tub man
Drugs man, Had me seein' shit that made me wonder how bitches could luv man
My bud Sam, Introduced me to his Bud that kinda made me wiser
Jane wasn't hittin' so good, So I took Eliza and baptized 'er
Ah damn, Im sayin' shit backwards, Alize was wat I dipped 'er in
Ripped her in, Flipped her in, She told me my lil dawgie was a bitch, So I slipped 'er in
Left me quiverin', Shakin' and twitchin', Bakin' and bitchin', Powdered my nose
So now I found it out, Alize, Mary J, Bud, Sam and Harry ain't nuthin' but hoes


Blah.....Juss wanted to have fun.....Sum of U prolly won't get it.....I can't help U.....I juss started a key and this is were my thoughts brought it......So gimme sum feedback......Peace

Lol, funny shit, kinda b a catchy lil audio if ya had a banjo in it... lmao......

LMAO you justgave me a reaon to put my weed song on here!!!! I guess that's whut an inspiration does for ya' I liked that shit especially this:"Jane wasn't hittin' so good, So I took Eliza and baptized 'er
Ah damn, Im sayin' shit backwards, Alize was wat I dipped 'er in"

*hits da blunt and smashes out*
*~Holler Atcha Gurl~*

hmmm... I don't know where to start at on this one Mentill you just kinda went from one extreme to another style-wise. I don't know if I like this or not it was like... weird. I guess I'm the one you can't help b/c I don't really understand or something. I liked parts but didn't like other parts so I'd give it a 5/10 in other words lol... come on Mentill you're capable of MUCH better

pz

Basically it was juss a story bout gettin' introduced to drugs.....Wit a lotta werd play.....If U get it....It's pretty dope.....

Crack headed Sally : Juss sum crack head round tha way
Introduced me to her friend Mary so I'd fucc her....
Mary : Mary Jane : Weed
Harry : A dope dealer (werd play comes in....Think bout Harry : Dirty Harry) blah
Shorty Shit stain : juss sum hoe
Pedro : U know ya mini you? (Ever seen Varsity Blues? Tha Penis slang names)
My bud Sam : Sam Adams tha beer
Introduced me to his "Bud" that kinda made me "Wiser" (Budweiser)


Blah that might help sum wat....I dunno.....But thanks for tha replies.....Peace

I understood it for the most part.. It was a'ight, not that great as far as flow goes.. but It was to point, an' a pretty good concept...

"lucy in the sky with diamonds".... one of those kinda ideas.. tip-tow around what you actually about..

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Uppin' for sum more feedback.....Peace

nice shit my nigga

nice skillz, never licked pill, he writes ill, cold- blooded
heart's iced filled, thinkin' bout the next mic that i might kill

that was hot kepp doing yo damn thang

Uppin' for tha last time.....Peace

WORD EM UP, GOOD WAY TO USE DA VOCAB TO INPERSONATE

DA DRUGZ//

I LIKE THIS STYLE MAN, I'M LEARNING I TELLYA..

hahahaha...........that was sum funny azz shit yo.