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03-18-03, 09:37 PM | #1 | |
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"The Best"-Genec!de spittin crazy
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peep this and the other track on my page gimmie fuckin feed lol ...enjoy
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/eyedeamusic.htm |
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03-19-03, 10:15 AM | #2 | |
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Peepin it out now homey,
Beat sounds like some club shit, Pretty tyte tho, bassline hittin, Your lacking energy horribly dog, lol, Need to get amped on a beat like this, The hook is a bit blah, Repedetive as fuck, Not very catchy, Your lyrics are nice, You just delivering them all wrong, Without energy , you bore the listener, Whats the concept of this track? it sounds like you just using whatever words rhyme and come to your mind,, like canibus and shit lmao. Needs work dog. |
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03-19-03, 07:28 PM | #3 | |
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yea yo, the delivery needs to be fixed a bit...seemed forced at points, like u were uncomfortable spittin lines...but its all good, nice attempt...
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