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Old 03-19-03, 01:49 AM   #1
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The truth is bout to hit yall clear/
audience around close want yall to draw near/
its about time that i spit this verse/
niggaz cant understand english so i'll put out a curse/
illiterate bastards understand clearly/
spittin whats real gon have to edited my shit severely/
puttin records out just to spread my name/
typing on message boards just to show my game/
checkin the newest shit out just to stay on point/
keepin my head clear cant be hittin the joint/
some rappin is made up but i'm keepin it real/
stayin on topic always somthin u feel/
a moment notice gotta no this man/
superhero spitter call a nigga peterpan/
now i'm the chef steady dishing the verses/
i spit first he ran gotta put out the searches/
the rawlest spitters i know gotta wipe they saliva/
step to the mic and gottem movin on like Mya/
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Old 03-19-03, 02:22 AM   #2
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Yo man, this shit is aiight, it rhymes well and flows good but instead of just rightin bout how u got game and how you own the world and that, yo should try writin about an actual subject..

Peace Out Yo!!!!
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Old 03-19-03, 02:24 AM   #3
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shit was hard fam. nice rhyme sceme and topic. keep postin
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