For Better Heads

Know that the world is made of mostly The Unseen,
and that it takes a keen eye to see beyond the screens.
You want proof ?....the soul, oxygen and gravity...
even the FM band before it reaches the ear cavity.
The optimum performance of the Human mind...
depends on how well it's able to assess time.
Another unseen...but notably counting none the less.
We live life in luxurious excess...but still in duress and stress.
Never do we ponder on the distractions of this world.
Instead, we let our minds wander on pursuit of this beautiful girl.
Quite decieved we will be in the end...
if the luxuries of this world were like our girlfriend.
Always calling us with a seductful finger...
and a gentle whisper, which lustful thoughts linger.
Unseen to us is this decrepit woman, who's hair is fake...
who's eye lashes are fake...who's nails are fake.
The day we catch her our hearts would quake.
When the screens are unveiled, each one lifted...
and we see for what we were so pursuant...
That day, the directions of our hearts are shifted...
when we see with open eyes, our aspirations ruined.
What was once beautiful to us is now a monster pursuant to us.
And we try to excape realizing what it's doing to us.
Don't let it be too late...like when our soul's withdrawn.
Time wasted was worth using...but when it's gone...
It'll be a source of grief.
This world is a thief.
When we are born, we get off the train with empty knap-sacks,
and a knowledge that the train will be back.
And so we travel in the land filling these bags...
knowing that God awaits us.
Fill it with trash or fill it with good stuff, but...
When the train comes, never the less, we drag.
What will it be that you present to your creator?
Or maybe you think you are a lawyer, or masterful orator!
All the gold, money, houses or cars are never friends.
But good deeds are never squandered in the end.

The Earth Is Three-Fourths Water But The World Is Four-Fifths Illusion.

spiritual uplifting

Yo dogg, that shit was aiight, some good wordplay, very good vocab, rhymin was alright, but it is probably something yo could work on which will also improve your flow which was still aiight, what yo sayin is so true dogg haha, clever the way you put it uh, anywayz, good drop.

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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yea.. I'm uppin' this.. vocab was real tight... flow fell off in some places.. or seemed to but only slightly, nice story/ topic...

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I have an off-beat spoken word cadance that sometimes doesn't translate well to text, unless you look at it from a poetic standpoint.
Thanks for the upps from the better heads on the site.
peace out !

just uppppin!

I really appreciate your art of mind. That's real. I'm a poet too and i see from the same rose tinted glass as some do, but you stretched my thought into really thinking about something i never really noticed.
You talented.

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P.E.A.C.E.

Thanx Orien, I'm Glad to see some still appreiciate pure poetry in hip-hop. I'm goin' to peep you. Keep flowing until others see too. Reeeeuppppin.

Yo, good prespective on da visions you see../

i feel you my brotha/

Thanx, KRISSKASS
I'm glad true heads been uppin this. I'll peep you.

uppinnnn!!!

upppinnnn!!!

uppin.

I'd give you a gold medal... but that shits to expensive lol... tight shit again.. OoNnEe

Thanx AngelicSheShe, understanding is a beautiful heart that bears fruit like a peach tree, sweet....
Some take one and make out of it a wonderful peach cobbler....
Some leave it to drop and rot for fodder.
It's true all that glitters is not gold....
Words are only as good as the cards you hold...some win, some bluff, and some fold. Keep on !