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Old 03-19-03, 05:09 PM   #1
Whytpac
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Another Day gone

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Dont Hate on this one for what u dont understand.

Another Day Gone

Another day gone and another soul lost.
With the absence of his love he leave hole an unbearable cost.

He was Brave and he fought for what was right.
Because of his drive I can write of him tonight.
To me , he was more then just a hero from a bloddy war.
But a fan & a friend some one who was there.
But now he is gone and he leaves many in great despair.
You touched so many with your love and Joy.
you treated me like I was your son your boy.
You came into my life touched it and left, leaving a great impression
But now you are gone and pain is here a mighty depression.

But you left a cure with me.
You left me nothing but great memories.
You were always at my games.
Without you now I will fell the pain,
But I know you will always be there.
I know you love and your care.

I will miss you.

Another day lost and you are gone.
But through all who knew you, your legacy live on

With Love 2 Charlie a Lost love one

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Old 03-19-03, 05:24 PM   #2
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Damn you put your emotions out there kid...

Can mos def feel you and relate...

Youve a nice way with words...

Peace
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Old 03-19-03, 05:52 PM   #3
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Whytpac u suck a whole lotta dick!
i rap quicker faster and better than yoour shit...
u dont even spit on the mic u use a keybaord!
motherfucker i was readin your shit and getting bored,
u say u want me in your crew you dum fuck
what protection do i need on the web u dumb fuck
im geed up i got my own crew to protect me cant u see didnt u know im got more bombs than sadan could eva have,, u better off running head on into a sedan!!!! opps sorry i drive cars u drive broadbands u fucking square,, i swear all u mother fuckers cant bare my rare shit///bitch///
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Old 03-19-03, 05:53 PM   #4
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Re: Another Day gone

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Originally posted by Whytpac
Dont Hate on this one for what u dont understand.


ha...you just sound like youre tired of cats hatin on you...hahahha....


but ya piece was aiight...simple in most aspects...ya vocab waddnt there...but ya thoughts conveyed somma ya message...there really aint too much i can say for ya buddy

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Old 03-19-03, 05:56 PM   #5
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whytpac u couldnt live up 2 black pac so quite b4 i embarres u,,, its time 2 rhyme its my time 2 shine,, shit i am like pac in his prime,,u wouldnt amount to him he could commit crime ur 2 scared..
poetic ninja.. u a winja!!!!!!!!!
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Old 03-19-03, 07:19 PM   #6
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Originally posted by jordan
Whytpac u suck a whole lotta dick!
i rap quicker faster and better than yoour shit...
u dont even spit on the mic u use a keybaord!
motherfucker i was readin your shit and getting bored,
u say u want me in your crew you dum fuck
what protection do i need on the web u dumb fuck
im geed up i got my own crew to protect me cant u see didnt u know im got more bombs than sadan could eva have,, u better off running head on into a sedan!!!! opps sorry i drive cars u drive broadbands u fucking square,, i swear all u mother fuckers cant bare my rare shit///bitch///


wow.....that was.........horrible........

As to WhytPac I felt that poem. I could really feel the emotion behind it. Nice piece.
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Old 03-20-03, 07:34 PM   #7
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Thanks tack this jordan kid is obviosly a fucking retard. lookin at that bitch what a retard if u wanna battle go to a battle sight but quick cloggin up my thread with ur rookie rymes k ok get ur own thread and make a fucking fool of urself there

hey Tack holla at me on IM again so we can talk I never got u on my list alterknights13
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