my shit stinks, so does my life
so my life is like shit, but not quite as nice
what is it with this world that makes it suck?
could be that everyone does for themself and doesn't give a fuck
when i look at people i dont see color just human faces
I'm white but seen problems associated with other races
white people are slowly become slaves, we all switched places
cuz they're stuck up, left in the past, with no traces
gutta practice acceptance to make it these ages
before it leads to destrcution predicted on Nastradamus's pages
the million man army could be a force from within
commitin a terroist attack on some aspect we're missing
the best way to protect ourselves is to look from their angle
and protect the last things we think they'd dismantle
they blow it up we'll build it again better and bigger
blow it up again and we'll build it back quicker
until they see no point their hopes won't even flicker
terrorism'll have no point like a gun with no trigger
u aint killing enough people just butting em with the gun
or making a difference, go back before ya get hung
im in my house just thinkin and drinking while pacing
is my like just wasting, with rhymes, as im writin and erasing
cuz sometime soon my life might just get taken
as we're at war and the worlds just faking
really on sadaam's side but being real patient
waiting fo' the right minute to attack our nation
blow up our asses that created discrimination
leave our democratic asses dead.. with comunism as a replacement

nothin' special... I liked the flow, vocab needs to be expanded...
"commitin a terroist attack on some aspect we're missing
the best way to protect ourselves is to look from their angle
and protect the last things we think they'd dismantle
they blow it up we'll build it again better and bigger
blow it up again and we'll build it back quicker
until they see no point their hopes won't even flicker"..... that was my fav couple of lines.. it's totally true...

yo.. could you either respond to my open mic verse or vot on my battle against enigmatic...... thx

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