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Old 03-21-03, 04:10 PM   #1
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Mayhem And Havoc

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MISCHIEF KID AND PSYCHO SID ARE AT IT AGAIN//

MAYHEM AND HAVOC IS THEIR GAME//

CREATING WAR WITHOUT GUILT OR SHAME//

THE MANY LIVES GONE WITH THE WIND//

ALL THEY CAN SAY IS, " GOD BLESS AMERICA"//

THE EVIL EMPIRE WE LIVE, HYPNOTIZED WIT A DEVICE//

THIS IS HOW KORESH MADE HIMSELF CHRIST//

GET IN YOUR MIND, AND LEAVE DA REST BEHIND//

NEW WORLD ORDER SHALL REIGN IN TIME//

BORN AND RAISED WITH DA SAME STANDARDS & FACE//

THE DRUG LORD'S SON IS A CHIP OFF DA OLD BLOCK//

ATTACKING IRAQU WITHOUT A REASONABLE TALK//

WHAT DA FUCK, U.S AINT LIKE IT USE TO WALK//

NOW ITS STEPPIN ON LITTLE COUNTRIES//

THE WORLD IS A BED, FALLEN MONKEYS BUMP THEY HEAD//

ENOUGH SAID, MARSHALL LAW ON THESE WRAG HEADS//

JUDGE DREDDS ON A MASSACRE TO BRING DOWN HUSSEIN//

LIBARATE THE PEOPLE OF WHAT?//

SADAM DIDN'T DESERVE MISSILES FOR DESERT//

THIS WAR IS WRONG, BUT NOW ITS BEEN TO LONG//

THE BEGINNING OF THE END, JOIN THIS EVIL TREND//

OR FACE EXECUTION BY OUR HANDS//

GET WHAT YOU WANT, ITS DEEP IN DA SANDS//

OIL AT ITS RICHEST, YOU GREEDY ASS AMERICAN

BITCHES// SADDAM ITS TIME TO HIT DA SWITCHES//

ROLE UP DA BLUNT, AND BEGIN DA HUNT//
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Old 03-21-03, 05:01 PM   #2
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nice political drop, the flow was too simple though
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Old 03-21-03, 07:35 PM   #3
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thanks homie, i know they are too simple.
i notice this
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Old 03-21-03, 08:01 PM   #4
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This also has the same problems as the other verse of yours I replied to so check that for more info about what's wrong but here's some new ideas you should do.

In your next drop don't use all caps and don't space out your lines like that. Keep it altogether how I'm writing, it won't look so long and more people will want to peep it. If it is long a lot of people won't check it out unless you are known in which in this case you are new. So, don't space out your lines and don't use caps... keep elevating

pz
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