the chours in red is already on the beat that i wrote these verses too. so enjoy.


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I guess with dumb luck I could get up and save the world
connecting mind n soul so beautiful making life’s ying yang full
As I’m the mind bomb that’ll explode and re power up like Goku
After smoking a bowl or 2 ill just go ahead and see what I can do
True to form I‘m takin my abilities back 2root from where they grew
Word is born kid I’m exposing the future like I already knew

Walking off with a snail might!!! and put up a frail fight!!! living under this pale light!!!

Personifying absolute power I tower over these cowards
Even though my soul’s worlds apart drifting threw flowers
Living more pipe dreams then Mario Luigi and bowser
Females fetish for gold so welcome to golden showers
with a splish in a gold splash and a wish you can hold last
That you will out pass this out cast when the bombs blast
Rolling tradition tight like a spiff and using this last hit
To watch everything anyone ever held dear fall to ash

Walking off with a snail might!!! and put up a frail fight!!! living under this pale light!!!

When the coroner tags my feet it’ll be a mind deceased a soul to sleep
As skeletons in greed only feed on speed living the high life like MGD
Dummies try singing past their peek as bunnies lay bleeding in the street
Piggys walking that uptown beat quickly devour people’s bloody meat
Drugies grieve in debt and scram as junkies commit scandalous scams
Still understand the flimsy plan after smoking a lil more then 3 grams
In brainstorm my frames torn the pain reforms, I transform like he-man
With the plan 2 reverse the curse that made me the king of the damned

Walking off with a snail might!!! and put up a frail fight!!! living under this pale light!!!

The nightmare to stay clean trying to find care in a daydream
feigns scream if man was machine then I’d be Optimus Prime
Letting high tech opticals spy threw these apocalyptic times
Curled simply the terrify defies words gently that realizes lies
After a couple of tries of bombing minds im still not stopping
For im living it up not giving a fuck while big brother simply sits watching

Walking off with a snail might!!! and put up a frail fight!!! living under this pale light!!!


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Yo is this a part of the other Drug related verse, the Mario, LUgi, Pipe dreams one?? Anyway, not bad dogg, kept consistent rhymin throughout, flow was alright, some good lines throughout, it's aiight man..

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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yeah dooce, peep the second verse. lol
stay up

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the verses are tight but the chores is weak and dosent really go with the rest of the ryme.

i see where ya can cum with that. thanx for the reply o-bleek, i appreciatte it

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the one that watches the watchmen:

this was good throughout but ya second verse was the tightest. maybe ya could up ya vocab a bit but u got in sum nice multis and flow was nice. no real criticisms. check mine shinobi life aight peace.

good lookin out. ill return the favor in a sec. up

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