It's hard on the streets no money, no car, blisters on my feet//
Unable to make my keep so I sleep uncomfortably//
On the couches and floors of people I meet//
Runnin' money and drugs//
Delving to the deepest realms of the thugs//
But I'm shown no love//
Can't show any emotion upon my mug//
So I just shrug, and keep goin' on//
Ain't no one gonna miss me when i'm gone//
It's just the same ol' song//
Pain and misery is the only companion of mine//
So on my waist, i'm forced to keep my nine//
Ready at the drop of a hat//
To perform a number on any coniving rat//
But to myself I stay honest and true//
Cause lord only knows the troubles i've gone through//
If it's true nice guys finish last//
Then consider me an enemy of the pack//
Cause I'll never be finished//
By the time they all diminish//
I'll be re-born and replenished//
For these are my true feeling //
About my times and my dealings//
Call it a poem or call it a flow//
Just remember these are the life and times of a pro//

I can't believe y'all are sleeping on me like this. Come on now...

Cause I'll never be finished//
By the time they all diminish//
I'll be re-born and replenished...

I like your style, these are the best linez. Let heads sleep...they only write...they can't read. They sleep on me too. keep it movin'.

your bar structure throws me off sometimes...but nice shit nonetheless...

Might i suggest not droping a new post every 5 minutes...you'll get less replies doing that....don't ask me the physics of it, i just know that you won't...

P.e.a.c.e.

I don't drop a post every 5 min... I usually post my flow, then respond to other shit, from other m.c.'s. That's what's supposed to be done, you got to check other nigga's threads and shit.

Yeah Enigmatic this shits aiight, rhyin was there but it was inconsistent at times which threw the flow out in patches. It's a good topic but there was something that threw me off a bit where you like contradicte yourself with these two lines..

It's hard on the streets no money, no car, blisters on my feet//

Then u said

Runnin' money and drugs//

Maybe I'm missin somethin but to me, you jsut pretty much contradictin yoself here dawg, just put it all together better next time, look at everly line u write, up your vocab and shit will be alot better!

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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sleep?? I'm wide awake!!! anyway the shyt was coo I liked whut you was bringin to tha table cause the shyt half the tyme is true, anyway holla atcha gurl
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