who is killin who as this war insues?//

don't ya realize the irony instead of the news//

the same side is blasting at their own platoons//

smoking themselves like da wild e. in looney toons//

percise missile direction my ass//

how many friendly fires reported in afghanistan//

see the facts and let them speak for what they stand//

news and media show bullshit to da american land//

some don't swallow it and othas are ignorant//

the whole war smells fishy and it stank//

if you believe, then you walkin da plank//

i'm out before my own allie shoots down my tank//

LOL...I'm glad you see it. They don't realize how foolish we look to the rest of the world. It's more noble to die in battle. But it looks like we can't fly helicopters...or repair them. Or even see our own people...two helicopters collided into each other, two went down with mechanical problems and we shot down one with a patriot missle. What's tha deal? Are we really that technologically advanced or what? Good peepin'....

thanks my brotha. i 'm happy to just feel your opinion//

lol funny but its true like ya country does just have a habit of dropping bombs on ya own side. ya killed a tank full of british soldiers in the last gulf war. anyway piece was aight simple but well i like the fact u anti war too many heads on ere jus dont seem to give a shit

by the way check my piece too shinobi life. aight peace

OOOoooh, yo little spit is like an electric fence, you cant touch it or be electricuted//

mad props to you and your flow...

we on the same page with this circus war

yeah i got the same opinion this war is fuked up chek out my piece 'fuked up war' and tell me what u think
nice little piece simple but to the point

yo, this was decent, I get the point you trying to get across... but this was too simple man, simple vocab, wordplay rhymes... the concept was exeptional, but you should work more on them skills, still, keep spitting man

Peace

yup, i'm still trying to connect little legos to big ones..

but i'm trying.

i respect your help my brotha, keep it up..