i was just going threw my closet and i found my first rhyme book, i was about 8 when i worte this so dont say you need to improve or and gay shit like that. there is probabley a couple bites in here remember i was like 8 i didnt know any better......


LMAO


it the return of the lyricist/
acting dumb on some gangster shit/
upper cutting for my counter hit/
busting out some more power shit like man of the hour shit/
forcing forfits/
lyrical spit slit hard hitter/
this is a flash back/
put you on your back fast and laugh/
you blast one time/
im sending armys to shoot missles /
pull the trigger and blow out brains/
like house of pain im jumping around/
throwing blows going pound for pound/
its a repeat like a remix im the artist/ <--------LMAO
telling rhymes that are never felt/
im getting high crashing cars with no seat belts/
im like a street sweeper im like a dick cause pussy get deeperr/
bitches/


now if that aint gangster i dont know what is

that was pretty funny... you need to improve.. lol j/k... for a first ever rhyme it was pretty good.. I didn't even know half those words when I was 8..

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^^^half of it was probabley bit off someone else, i dont remember who though but im sure i bit off someone when i was a little i though it was cool to use other peoples raps

That could be put in frontlines and beat some people around here.
Elevate elementry-school homeboy!
lol.