Keystyle here, I was reading all these war opinion verses and kinda got inspired... just thoughts popping into my head... check it...

Hey yo ever since September 11th,
you’ve rendered to hatred,
intending to severe the head of whoever is against us,
whatever is said that is clever offends us/
you’re wanting your fist-in,
whoever’s not with us existing,
insisting to follow an instinct,
that brings us in instants... to violence,
you see all these protests and fucking want silence,
you see all the signs and just bring down your eye-lids/
Your searching for gore,
man just thirsting for war,
and you're pro with the storm/
that spreads through the gulf, and engulfs,
everything that’s approached/

Hyped up cause so far all you’ve seen,
is the actions of war machines,
but kid yo your not a marine,
claiming the shit's not your scene/
fucking hypocrite, think-of-it,
while some in the thick-of-it,
your sitting just holding your dick and I’m sick of it/

Every time that a bomber releases,
you think the result just increased,
the peace between all Middle Easterns?
Good Jesus!
yo tell me what’s wrong with this thesis,
no pros does this reaches,
just peace getting blown into pieces…

We weren’t attacked, but we’re striking back,
yo you said what!? Can you bring that back?
Is this making sense,
will this make it end,
will this kill the hate in the heart of men,
yeah ok then lets play pretend…
you’ve accepted it, but I’ve rejected it,
thas all I got to say man let me end-this-shit…

like I said, it was a freestyle... thanx for reading, peace

this was more like a poem to me yo....
still..the meaning was dope and shit, this war topic is gonna get played hella quick...this was a pretty decent keystyle though yo.....
i would go more in depth but i dont really feel like it right now...ill come back later and quote the lines i liked the most....this was coo...

yeah, thanx

at last sumone who really knows wat they talkin bout. u obviously aint just following wat the tv tells us and seeing thru the bullshit. the whole thing was tight and flowed well. a good little keystyle. anyway check mine shinobi life peace cuz

thanx man, it's just some of my opinions on things... quickly keyed... I got more to say... but... I won't put that in rhymes right now, Peace

Like ol' boy said the war subject is not gonna be that original no more after awahile, but I don'think s that stoo mich of a bad thing because peeps need to stay up on what going on and shit. Your flow seen pretty cool kinda stop and go like and right to the point.
this joint is pretty good, keep spitin'

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True indeed, Tell me how we have 300,000 soldiers...Iraq kills 20 americans, 20 british...an' they say we don't have enough so they order 100,000 more...must be somethin' they're not tellin us dog...see thru tha linez...great piece!

yeah glad y'all was feeling it... peace

yo man aint bitchin or nuttin but return the favour and review my piece. heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35519
aight peace

Yeah if you add a "Please", then I might... just might... lol....

i like your ryme eventhough some may say it sounded like a poem.
i read it as if was a flow.
It was good and interesting.
dope shit, keep it up.

nice flow alias.



but i think this shit needs to happen.


blood for oil
damn right we all spoiled
don't offend or defend cause that might mean toil
makes my blood boil
to think of that royal
man that controls the mideast with torture and still we aren't loyal
hitler did the exact same shit
but it was okay to get made at it
now we are soft, fuck shruggin it off,
give me a gun or even a sawed off
kill all of them it phazes me not
cause we need to defend what freedom we got
i might get shot but fuck why not
to save all our asses i'll gladly get popped
Bush is my nigga, so fuck it dog
while y'all sit like bumps on a log
i'm in it , we win it, and the flag still waves and they play the same song
oh say can you see.....

good looking out man...
You got a point there... should post this on a different thread... cause it sounds good... try n get some replies on it...
Peace