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03-27-03, 02:55 AM
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Last edited by JTRIX : 08-15-03 at 06:19 PM. |
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03-27-03, 05:53 AM
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erm dont kno wat to say. it flowed aight but ya first few lines just not really that funny... sorry but it just felt lazy then. as for the rest of it it flowed well and ya vocab was quite good but did ya have any direction wen writin it? maybe i just missed it. anyway check mine shinobi life aight later
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03-27-03, 07:22 PM
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Thanx a lot
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