you know that my flows be bringing the shit//
if ya dont think quick you might swallow you lip//
what the hell was that oh yea you tink prick//
i go and play hide and seek with you trick//
yall better watch mouth before i start protessen//
cause once you start guessen, here comes your secend lessen//
because i drop rimes and fines for possen those nines//
thats umm 1,2,3... shit im losen count of my crimes//
your girl last night asked her to stick it in her hinds//
G you better be catchen up to the times//
cause i see you at home pressen rewinds to follow my rimes//


that is all i have i will add to it later peace

this was wack..one of the less talented pieces ive seen
write about something that isnt used repetedly that every single
cat is writing about...it isnt dope shit yo....i advise you to stop writing this bullshit...think of something on a higher level..get a message across....
learn how to spell..mispelling words in text is not a good thing..a sign of a gramatically challenged emcee...reflects poorly upon yourself.....
plz try to elevate..plz
your flow..structure..content..spelling..vocab..everyth ing in my view needs elevation..loose the /'s i think we can tell the bar ends w/out them...

~2~

uppin

RIDE OR DIE/BLITZ 'LL MAKE YA SIGH N CRY/YO JUS LOST FIRST PRIZE/YA PRIDE,BLITZ 'AS A LYRICAL DESIGN/TO SHINE/UPON BEATS N RYHMES/GIVEN OUT BY U TWATS THAT SAY U COUNT CRIMES/COUNT CRIMES?,U CAN ONLY COUNT TO 3/THEN B,BEING ME/IS MORE GREEN THAN HERBAL TEA/WILL MAKE U WANA C/IN THA MIRROR TO CHEK WHO U REALLY BE/G?/SHIT BITCH,U DONT KNO THA USE OF A CD/CHEK MA CV...DJ SLASH PRODUCER/WIT A LITTLE BIT OF MC/WHILE MA RHYMES R TIGHT,N URS R LOOSER/THAN URS MUMS PEICE/U WANT BEEF?/I GOT MORE HATRED ON THESE STREETS/THAN THA 1'S THAT KILLED THA DECEASED...PAC N BIGGIE/BUT I STIK 2 MA FEET/WHILE U STIK 2 THA FLOOR WIT RED FLESH N MEAT/U STARTED JUS COZ I LEFT A HICKIE/ON YA GALS LEFT TITIE/U BATTLE WIT ME/U WILL GET SMACKED UP LIKE FIFTY/UR FUTURES MISTY/UR SO PICCY/Y DONT U PIC ME,THA REAL G/N THA ONLY REAL MC/BETWEEN U N ME!

HAHA.........

hey go battle in front lines this open mic so dont battle in here shit

Ride-wot a rippin u got off The Root!!!
Think B4 U spit......