Something I wrote..Its pretty hot..so peep it

Reiteration of my determination ta make this complete domination of hip hop my chosen occupation/
Meditation usin intense concentration designed ta strengthen my dedication towards my lyrical vocation/
Application of lyrical molestation wit lethal bars commitin penetration leavin ya in verbal castration/
Desecration thru utter annihilation of rapflava's popular expectations leadin to your prostration/
Obliteration of all duplication basically correctin a standin abomination backed by society's aberration/
Incineration of all regimentation leading to the crumbilazation of all stereotypes without reservations/
Dismantilization of the cultivation of our genre towards commercialization leadin ta new innovation/
Mobilization of the organization who's advanced hip hop education leads to our culture's salvation/
Communication of all information destroyin all attempts at isolation is the only way ta find elevation/
Adaptation to every situation is vital for the continued conservation of our beloved Hip Hop Nation/

sick multies and vocab.. damn.. nice flow dawg.. uppin'

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Tight....Overall sickwit it.....People should stop sleeping...on this

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it was quite nice but to be honest the "ation" thing got borin after 4 lines. but ya points ya got across were good and i could actually see a meaning behind most of ya bars. flow was sumtimes choppy but generally good. anyway check mine shinobi life aight peace

uppin for more feed back

I defenitley thought this drop was ill. The multi's were endless. Nice drop. uppin

i agree with this guy, seems like there;s not as much effort cuz anyone can easily go on a rhyming dictionnary site and get 100 words that rhyme the same and put them in a rhyme, seems like it was all vocab and no sense to it

read the lines carefully..they will make sense to you

Communication of all information destroyin all attempts at isolation is the only way ta find elevation/
Adaptation to every situation is vital for the continued conservation of our beloved Hip Hop Nation/

Now that's what I'm talkin about, heavy weight...check my piece
(Elements)...maybe you can get it...too many heads sleep...

yo cmon i peeped ur piece now peep mine its just the rules of the board.

stfu..and stop bitching..it was 4:00 in the morning when you posted that..i was sleep..ok

^ lol.........bitching niggas......anyways that shit was hard. Some people find it hard and complex to flow like that but you made your stand corrected and real.......I loved it

yo any cat can spit it complex, its called buyin a "theasaurus",
i agree with illuzionist, but kmfrob was right as well it was good for a few bars, but then it just went with just havin to rhyme "tion"

this was a nice drop tik...keep it up fam.,..peace

I HATE "ION" RAPPERS!!!!! just because words end with ion and sound like big words and they are the easiest words to rhyme doesnt mean you got nice vocab. you might think your coming complex but your fooling your self with the ion rhymes,