This is a little song i wrote called Whatever..

(HoOk)
..It's whatever wit me,if it's whatever wit you..
..It's whenever,however,whatever you wanna do..
..Cuz ima problem for you,your not a problem to me..
..Cuz after this screaming in pain is what you will probaly be..

(VeRse 1)
..You run ya mouth,talk sweet when you be on the phone..
..Then you scared like Machuly Calken when you home alone..
..I dont punk for the fun,I do this all for respect..
..You gotta a icy chain,I come and defrost ya kneck..
..Then i off this tech,and leave you wit 21 shots to your ribs..
..And my gun is so arrogant,let me show you how cocky it is..
..Put da dot on ya lips,insert the clip make scream for your life..
..Cuz ima blind you,when i show you the gleam from the knife..
..Defeat is alright,if u can get back up and handle ya bizz..
..Half yall pussies could get handled and dismantled by kids..
..Now think about this,I'll rip ya body from limb to limb..
..Then crush ya bones,while rocking a fresh pair of Yimbs..holla

(HoOk)
..It's whatever wit me,if it's whatever wit you..
..It's whenever,however,whatever you wanna do..
..Cuz ima problem for you,your not a problem to me..
..Cuz after this screaming in pain is what you will probaly be..

(VeRsE 2)
..You say u gangsta,yet ya rollex goes tick-tock..
..I'll leave ya brains sitting on ya arm like a wrist watch..
..I hate when fags speaks,cuz nothin ever seems to come out..
..By deleting ya posts,dont do nuttin but be helping you out..
..I hate corny rappers, who rap about knives,car, and guns..
..An the only sticky thing dey got aint weed,its a hunny bun..
..Yall cats think ya funny huh?yall the reason for discrimination..
..Every time u spit,I can see that u really faking..
..Yall rooks need to step back,and let us vets do our thing..
..Da closest u get to rap,is if u go R&B and sing..

(HoOk)
..It's whatever wit me,if it's whatever wit you..
..It's whenever,however,whatever you wanna do..
..Cuz ima problem for you,your not a problem to me..
..Cuz after this screaming in pain is what you will probaly be..

It's got some punches...but for a song it needs to be longer.
but good flow....doesn't need much more than elevation...Keep flowin'...be a heavy weight or nothin' at all...