Hey, Im just messin around. I like 50, he my nigga and all, but I just felt like dissin a celebrity and Jay-Z is boring to diss


Yo, check it

Listen to the truth as I slowly rap this song
G-ay U-nfrequented N-oise I-ngratiatin T-hongs
Sellin their soul for cheap, G-ross Unit is disgracin the game
Call yourself comin out wit new s**t but it sounds all the same
You remain a failure, a b***h like "Old Yeller"
Ya album sold millions, but you still as blind as Hellen Keller
50 got shot 9 times but still can't get it in his mind
Maybe if he get shot by a bazooka, then he'll spit some ill rhymes
You all bout the hoes frontin like you all bout the dough
They only call you 50 Cent cuz you snitched to 5-0
You translated that move to cheap cash, a buck, you Pussy Mint
But half ya rhymes be true, so you cut that into 50 Cent
Lloyd Banks probably the illest, but he hidin under the dish
Using a 5-0 snitch wit mo' problems portrayin a fake thug that he is
Tony Yayo got some game, but the Unit he gotta change
50 mind torturin rhymes is only bringin him pain
G-Unit is a bunch of wankstas, they as real as REAL TV
Nigga you want some publicity, then take on L.U.G


Just for fun like I said. 50 is my nigga, so this wasn't anything serious, Just tell me what you think

this was a pretty weak diss, emcee "illest", fairly standard stuff, plain vocab, no real hard hitting punches.

You remain a failure, a b***h like "Old Yeller"

apart form that one.

keep practising.

it was kinda standard, but at least you were consistant....you never got off track.

not bad

"I like 50, he my nigga and all,"

Man, don't say that shit haha, the diss was pretty average like punches were pretty weak but it rhymed pretty well and flowd alright...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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it wasnt great but it wasnt shit

well, thanks anyway

With disses of people we actually know, I think personals are paramount. You called him out for snitching,cool, but the standard "you a bitch" shit talking doesn't make it for such efforts.

dawg i seen niggas wit no arms throw betta punches pretty average shit nuttin dat stand out elevate >>>one<<<

They only call you 50 Cent cuz you snitched to 5-0

thats some pretty funny shit right there...
good diss

at best this was pretty bland... you in an elevator and the only way is up so elevate... firstly spit on a topic you know about... something that comes from inside and not trying to diss someone you dont like... and 50 is not your "nigga" because you dont know him he doesnt know you and most probably would bust 9 shots in your ass for saying that rhyme... spit on a topic that relates to you.. the only way you can get better... keep rhymin

oohhh, inspire educatin, lol na that made mo sense then u think,
mc illest u might wanna read that twice and then write yo next piece

i dont think anyone picked up on this but real tv is real.... i mean thats the whole basis of the show... real footage that isnt edited... so if he is a real as real tv that would make him really real then wouldnt it? therefore that line makes you whole verse *ahem* wack... lol na just playin but that real tv line was just a big contradiction to your message... dont mean to pick on you or anything but you shouldn't have let that one slip through...

was it that bad??

in a word , yes.

nah, i don't think so, oh, well i guess i'll say that since i wrote it