heres the rules usual shit
15 lines max
no crew votes dik ridin etc
3 votes is K.O other wise most votes counts
i'll spit first

Aight... lets do this

u just volunteered urself for suicide,no backing out access denied,
rip your 'balls' off then make u 'swallow' ur 'pride',with one swift move i ended ur gay porn career,all because u took a step to near
fuck it i'd just smash ur bones and rip ur heart thru ,i could be a paraplegic and still waste u, wit my 'Nike's' boot u up in the 'Air' scar u to the 'Max', this nigga has no need for steel toe caps,a penchant for raps and scraps make 'light' work of 'saps'
disfigure u beyond recognition,family could see u but make an ommision,plastic surgery ur only hope but ur so poor it's wishin
man ur so weak and lightweight an 'anorexic' could 'eat u alive',tryin to be a heavyweight u constantly strive, but never suceeding ur wasting ur life,'ugly' bastard u'd struggle to get a wife, just 'face' it u fail in an industry in which i thrive
i rap better than u could ever 'dream',give u 'nightmares' u wake at night and scream,unconsciously livin out a scene
but shit u wake up and it's reality,i make rippin kids like u a formality,my raps are like a 'narcotic' got u 'addicted' 'hits' to your body physically inflicted,

Nice Verse Fgee,

Yo check out my battle with24 inch Rims man itz gettin slept on

vote on mine too with Rtikulate . . . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35971 . . . and I will vote on yours as soon as the 2nd person drops. You got my word.


EDIT::::
Nevermind. I KO'd him 3- 0. I'll vote on yours anyways, tho. Just make sure you keep it in mind next time I have a battle up in the thread. pz.

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

Your battling me, so it's no wonder you look scared/
cuz beating you's no big feat, like a midgets footwear/
and we aint placing no bets, so get rid of the punters/
cuz I'm a cold blooded killer like amphibian hunters/
I know ya gonna lose, watch me rip a fucking hood rat/
cuz winnings an adhesive, and I stick to what I'm good at/
your career never took off, you were shit from the start/
so ur big break will only come when I split you in parts/
and I know your a bum, just another rookie to chew/
so ur looking for respect? too bad it's not looking for you/
I'm throwing so many punches, I'll probably beat you twice/
you'll be catching more slaps than E Honda's cheating wife/
and now it's time to finish you, I'll make you suffer kid/
cos your life is on a knife-edge, sorta like butter is/
I'm easily the sickest, and I'm spitting with bomb flows, so if you think ur gonna beat me, you got it twisted like corn rows

Tight battle....

i go wit fgee his ryhmes where tight....

I liked it alot...

vote=fgee

I give my vote to Chrit, he had some really nice punches.

::you'll be catching more slaps than E Honda's cheating wife/

::cuz winnings an adhesive, and I stick to what I'm good at/

^^nice . . .

fgee, its looks like you got ideas, but you need to work on how you structure it into a verse and on how it flows. work on coming up with more complex punches, also.

::rip your 'balls' off then make u 'swallow' ur 'pride'

^^nice

all the others coulda been stronger.

get rid of all the excess filler


good battle ya'll.

keep me in mind if you see me battlin someone in the threads and vote on my shit. pz.

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

I can't vote, but I like to comment on as many battles as possible. And Mind Theory ^^^^^^^ said everything like i would have. Could battle. Uppin this.

Yo nice battle overall close one but my votes gonna go to FGEE good battle tho and yes I did vote on the poll and if yall can I three battles being slept on thnx.1

0-1 fuck it, lets up it

2-1 me uppin

up again

uppin

keep on voting