15 lines min u said

here goes, interact this kid blows,
kill shows, matterfact smack u hoes,
rolls of definition takin souls, who knows,
the first time i spit ur verse takin tolls,
im cashin bank rolls, the moment this unfolds,
u already sweatin ears to toes, fake cat,
smokin bowls, im internationally known,
for rippin u clones, settin this to of 50 to none time shown,
u like cricket outta your zone, winnin this thrown,
i flippin chrome, sendin u home,
sayin god damn this muthafucka ripped me man,
i gotta try to make a stand, losin demand,
gettin sunk in the sand, ur verse after this,
gonna be banned before u get a chance,
so step up to the plate, i alredy saved u the last dance,

was up dog u gonna flow

i'm droppin

da only thing dis kid blows...is a dick on a all star gay porn show....(1)
yeah you be smakin hoes...da inflatable type...dressed as ya man..with a name tag sam (2)
you cashing bank rolls to feed ya family with bread rolls...its a death toll bitch...ditch battling its time to switch(3)
its a crime with your lyrical non-sense ryhmes...but i'm kind...i'll place da knife in ya chest inch at a time(4)
ur internationally known...like elvis....instead of grabbing a mike you go for the one between da pelvis(5)
da only thing i'm sweating is my dick in ya hoe...she be known worldwide...for the most dick in one go(6)
dis battle was for fun...but ya ass has been cooked like a steak well done (7)
stop ryhming....it aint ya time "N" stop whinging kid..theres life after death...my knife is your vision like a fucked up test
(8)
ive stepped up to ya plate...but your last out da gate. its fate....its your chemical state got you fucked up...son of maralin manson...dont worry you got ya tickets to HANSON front row...(9)
time for me to holla...i forgot heres a lesh for ya mom and her collar(10)
scortch your life has been torched...good luck wit ya show...Remember when taking da dick just go wit da flow....

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uppin them votes this way 187 holla

lillem gets my vote
some good verse in there

uppin



more votes...

Well, shit goes like this ...

Scortch, the only real thing that your verse haad was multis ... and I like multis ... a lot ... don't get me wrong ... but the point of a battle is to attack ... and I just wasn't feelin' that from you dawg!

Lilem ... though I disagree that you should EVER use Eminem's name in your own, it's aight ... You're gettin' my vote for the simple fact that you were able to turn most of Scortch's shit around on him ... Pretty good punches ... Flow was aight' ... I'm feelin' yo verse kid ...

VOTE = Lilem

Pz

VOTE ON MY SHIT !!!

lillem, that was fucking off chops...

my vote - Lillem

Uppin

lilem was hittin that shit
he got my vote

vote on my shit if possible though........