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Now, I'm always interested in trying out different styles of poetry. And this is a completly different style of poetry than anything I've ever tried before. The song itself is Winter by Tori Amos. But just think of it like... what I've done to it, how I've altered it, is a representation of the tears in ones eyes, the choking in ones throat, and the falling feeling in ones heart. I dunno if you will, but I absolutley consider this peice to be poetry.

~Shalom~

Also... is not the picture in my signature the niftiest?

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

hmmm...

...okay, so i guess this is poetry, most things in life, most art in a sense is poetry...

...but of course, it is very unconventional and..well....subtle..

...but i guess in the end, even though it's more like an 'artistic' like song, songs are usually poetry in a sense...so this is poetry...

...what did i get out of this?...someone who shows love to another - unconditionally and consistently, while the other is the opposite, conditionally and inconsistently...

...stamping out any 'growth' in the feelings that he/she might feel before they get on top of him/her...maybe cos he's scared, maybe cos he's just using her...most probably the former, that he's scared of feeling something deeper...getting in touch with is own feelings....and/or furthering their relationship..

...so whilst she/he loves him (well i presume it's a she that loves him, as it's a woman that is singing it....but then it could be seen the other way too....pah!)...and is in touch with her feelings, and is now searching for his....he keeps stamping it out...or SCRATCHING it out...and finally she breaks through to him at the end...or something like that...(!!)..oh yeah, and when you say "she said"....that also to me indicates that she's slowly breaking through..

...anyway, i always support something 'different'...i used to do stuff like this a while back...(don't ask)....not exactly like this, but similar stuff....and you're the kind of 'different' and abstract guy who'd do this kind of stuff too...and that's why i was pleasantly surprised by it...even though i felt it was probably a minute too long....(and that may be an understatement..or an overstatement)l...

..anyway, one last thing - was that someone you knew singing?...or did you sample it?...

Oh yeah, and i like the sig pic...

well enough of my waffling....

...fish cake sandwich (formerly respect...!)...

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

Oh yeah, sorry, for some reason i didn't read that big block of writing you wrote properly...so it was Tori Amos, eh?...

So come on people, support something a bit different...give your HONEST opinions...

necromancer ive been a fan since before teh 7 times rapbattles has crashed......(hazy)<alter ego
but this is beautiful i appreciated it very much and i apreciate the time and effort you put into this work i rember along time ago you did a peice about a gurl that struck me odd was like emily or eileen or sumthin .....hmmmmmm nice to see your talent again appreciated it highly